hmmm... it was ok but its really sad and it said it was gona be h/hr but there wsnt really anything that points to that. Very good writing skill though  |
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Definitely one of my favourite stories.
This is how I tend to write, too.
Though you are a far better story teller.
Thank you. I'll say it again: thank you. |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/05
AWESOME! THAT WAS FANTASTIC! Sorry too tired to say more then that blah, nonsense, great characterizations.. well descriptions of Ron adn Hermione, great feeling, emotion.. Great! |
Author Feedback: Thank you again. (Now I'm wondering if it was that good, or if sleep dep makes all my fics better. I might have to prescribe that in the author's notes. Warning: best read after going 24 hours without sleep.) I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much, particularly Ron and Hermione.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really do hope you've gotten some sleep! |
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JessiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/05
Wow. This was great although some of your stories probally would never be close to happening I love them. They show Angst and pressure. The world on your shoulders. To understand, let me geuss, your a teen too Right? Yup. I know the feeling. Pain without gain...and often impossible Loves...(Aww! I rymed!(Even though it sucked(Hey I did a triple Parenthsees)) |
Author Feedback: Thank you. True, most of my one shots are speculative and are at least one step outside of canon. I like to use one shots as a way of exploring a character's emotions and mindset. See if they might have something more than the emotional range of a teaspoon. 
Actually, no, I'm not a teen. Been quite a number of years since I've been anywhere in the teens, but it's good to know that I am able to dip into "teenaged angst". I think angst is universal, actually, something that crosses all boundaries, something that knows no limitations.
Congrats on the rhyme and the trips. Good job!
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
that was....wow... that was really good. it showed a lot of depth and it really made me see what was happening |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I'm glad that it was easy for you to visualize; I was a bit worried that with the language being so sparse, it wouldn't be easy to picture what is happening (or, rather, not happening) in the fic. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it.  |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
And another, equqal wonderful written story from you 
I LOVE the end... couldn't have beared another sad ending that leaves me feeling as if I've lost somthing myself...
So, thanks for posting and thanks for this end that gives a little hope
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Author Feedback:  I am really after blushing now!
I'm glad that you loved the end. I couldn't do that to Ron and Hermione, especially to Harry -- he needed to come home. He deserved to live, to have a life. After everything, he should at least get a chance at life.
You are welcome, and thank you for reading. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
You are an awesome writer. That's all I can say.
Well, apparently not all I can say. I tried to send this and it said more than ten words was a requirement to reviewing... hah hah  |
Author Feedback:  Thanks for all that you can say and then some... 
I had no idea there was a review minimum. O.o |
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This was quite beautiful and I like your writing style! I loved how you were able to express the depth of emotions that Ron and Hermione felt as they grieved what they believed to be Harry's death.
I'm so glad it ended on a positve note. I wasn't sure until the end what was going to happen, but I was hoping! I love the angst, but I love an ending with possiblities even more. Lovely work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Gosh...
I wanted to keep the piece sparse, so I am glad that Ron and Hermione's grief came through despite that. I was afraid that it might not seem sad enough, given the enormity of their perceived loss.
I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks so much! |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
This was amazing. It's wonderful as a one-shot, though I wouldn't be upset if you added on to it. Some people choose to continue one-shots, and they ruin the appeal of the story. I'm sure you won't.
I loved the way you conveyed the emotions. |
Author Feedback: Oh, wow. Thank you. Wow. Thanks for the vote of confidence. It's in my mind to add on at some point, but I doubt it would be very much. No more than three acts. Don't want to ruin the pacing or the mood of it.
Thanks so much. I'm glad that you liked the piece. |
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I spent most of the story on the verge of tears, but it was nice that it had a happy ending...that Harry survived, that after everything he gone through, he had a chance to live after the final battle. I liked the details with his scar and the scars on the Death Eaters disappearing.
I've really enjoyed the stories you have written and am looking forward to more. |
Author Feedback: EEP! I'm sorry to have done that to you!  I couldn't have Harry not live in this story; it just did not seem right. He deserves a chance at life. "The Powers That Be" owe him at least that.
Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. It is really appreciated. |
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Well written, dark, but so very well written with emtion from both Ron & Hermione. It was good to read about Ron's feelings about Harry, and they were written very well. |
Author Feedback: Thank you kindly. I am a bit on a Let's Mature Ron crusade, I s'pose; Weasley gets mussed up a fair bit in canon and our fair Portkey. WEASLEY IS OUR KING!!!
*ahem* Got a bit, ah, carried away there...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and your comments. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
What an intense one-shot. Great ending...loved what you did with the marks. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Erasing the marks eemed to be the easiest way to let Ron and Hermione know that Harry was successful. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
I thought for awhile there that Harry died...To bad this fic is "complete" There's some stuff there that could be expanded. Well anyway good one |
Author Feedback: It seems as though I've gotten a few people with that. Sorry to take such advantage.
I might revist this later on. It was just something I had to get out so's I can concentrate on Black Society. Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it. |
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IzabelSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
Excellent story. Wow. I really like the way everything is set. I could feel the deep pain and sorrow. Very good writing style. Keep writing other great stories |
Author Feedback: Thank you, thank you... I'm going to try to write some great stories. Try to... Eep... ^.^'
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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