So sweet! ^^ Harry and Hermione were adorable...
“I'll never leave you, do you know that? No matter what happens or what I say: I will never leave you,” I loved that line!

I cried so hard. It was perfect. I loved it. You're brilliant, you know that?

It was okay. Pretty cruddy ending, i think it could have gone on quite a bit longer. Either way, good effort.

This was a lovely story, beautiful, simple, and sweet. I enjoyed reading it very much. =)

Aww! That was just so sweet! What a happy couple!

well... very good. i love this story. please ,write more.
yours truly,
Halie

Very Good. Better than what i have been reading (my dad is constantly on the computer and all i have is CHILDRENS chapter books). Well my dad went to work today, so i got the computer. i liked this story a lot.
yours truly,
Halie

Very enjoyable! Loved the angst and the sweet ending. And Harry's kind words to Hermione were just wonderful. Keep it up!

-snicker- nice ending... lol. and i liked the side of this story. have you noticed that all the fics you normallly read, it's all sweet and mushy and complete love with pretty much no relationship problems. I reealize that that's how people want it to be with harry and hermione as most think they are made for each other, but everyone fights. even with true love, and true soul mates. but with the true love, it just means that they get back together. lol. great jop though, i loved it. it was more down to earth and like real life.

Harrysgrl

Aww... Nice how you portray their relationship as not all heaven all the time...! Even those who are the most in love fight some time.. And of course make up afterwards..
great story..!

This is a cute little ficlet. i like it very much keep up the good writing.

that was a good story. short and sweet. it sucks when harry and hermione fight but, hey, it has to happen sometime. Well, that's all i have to say. keep up the good work.
-rmp

that was soooooooooooooo beautiful. really! that should be like a scene in a movie!

Very cute story, the ending was very sweet. You could almost feel the tension and strain between Harry and Hermione. Good work!

great one shot! okay maybe it wasn't actually great, it was okay though, especially since you have not written anything in awhile. it was pretty short, even for a one shot. There wasn't enough of a plot and it didn't really develop enough. i think it would have been better if you had shown the fight as well. Write soon!