squee! that was really deep an meaningful. you really are a good poet, i hope you get a publisher. i really enjoyed this, and i'd like to see more of your poems in the future. you better be careful though, there will be girls jumping all over you if you post your best ones, lol. outstanding job!

this is the most beautiful poem i've ever read its so poetic the words full of meaning, its great its wonderful, it made me cry!(sob)

That was strange but great.It leaves some questions.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.