Awwwww!!!!That was so cute! I loved it! It really showed why Ron and Luna are so perfect for each other. Kudos!

Well I'm glad that you continued writing R/LL rics (read your other R/LL fic). Great job with this one. It was quite wonderful. Something that Luna would be like. Great job.

awww, that was sooo romantic and sweet! youyr good at writing Roon/Luna fics, why don't you continue and write more. I bet it'll turn out great.

This is a very good story I liked it very much

OH MY GOD!! That was totally the cutest sad thing i have ever read LMAO! Awsome story by the way! Hey did you write a sequel cuz if you did i would read it! Mail me if u did! lol! TWO THUMBS UP!! GOOD STUFF!

Just a perfect story. I mean until I read this I thought Ron would stay a git for the rest of his online and book life. You should right some more Ron and Luna stories. And please dont make one where Luna and Ron get seperated as this romance is my favorite yet. Please also yim billvaladez if you need help to write some more. I enjoy the Harry Potter books more than any other books. For the writeing of this book I give you two thumbs up.

A wonderfull story showing Ron in love. At first he seemed like a true git but later it showed Ron could show some emotion towards others. Also a good job of showing the brewing romance towards Hermoine from Harry. I wish to read your other storys as well.

Awww! Good job on getting the Git and luna together, luna is such a great character and that poem was excellent, doing a great job of explaining her and such! Great work and thanks for sharing!

aaaawwwww!!!!!! This is such a cute story!!! I never really like the idea of Ron and Luna, i thought it didnt really make sense, but this fic totally changed my mind!!! I LOVED IT!!!! Ron was a jerk at first, but thats who he is i guess. I think you should keep up the R/L writing! I really enjoyed it! I am a R/L supporter now!!!!

I like your take on R/Lu. You get a lot of Luna's quirkiness down, and Ron's resistance to going out with her, and his complete lack of tact. His line about not wanting to see Harry and Hermione kiss was cute and so in character, and his reaction to the poem was so him. That mixture of wtf? and oh, and damn I feel bad and she's had it so tough. I like that you conveyed all of that in the space of such a short piece. I like how your Luna didn't give up, how she asked him first and when he turned her down she tried a totally different approach and how she wasn't scared to give him such a personal poem.

My only quibble was that R/Lu got together too fast and I would have liked more development, and all, and wasn't crazy about him getting her over a poem, because Ron is clueless, it would take him three lifetimes to get Luna, that's the fun of it.

But, I love your talk of her bringing him into her imaginary world, and the purple sky at the end. Cute touches, and so sweet.

Austenlover rec'd this fic to me.

You are sooo evil -- how come you didn't tell me you wrote a Ron/Luna fic??

*resists the urge to strangle you* Very lovely story, Jennifer -- fluffy and just how I imagined (haha) Ron and Luna to be. *huggles* Loff this!

That is one of my favorite songs by Evanescence. You did a great job of incorporating it here. I've thought a few times that it was very fitting for Luna I just didn't have any idea how I could incorporate it into anything...this is wonderful!

Thanks for such a great story!

Oh wow that's such a great story Jennifer. I loved it. Love the way you worked the song in. It real sounds like a song that would fit Luna.

Anyway great job.

~ Gems

Oh, that was really sweet Jennifer. I liked. I like how you integrated the song lyrics into the story. That was very creative. They do fit Luna.

Great story! I have written a similar story with the same song and title. Don't worry, I didn't copy you. I posted it on fanfiction.net Jan. 6. You could go and read it if you want. (fanfiction.net/s/2208633/1/). Anyway, I LOVED your story! Better than mine anyway.