This story... amazing, and i love it, i was going to kill you until you told me that there's a sequel.. now i don't see a sequel and want to kill you again... where is it?!
I love it
keep it up
can't wait to hear about the sequel
-megz-

I quite liked your style of writing...it completely reminds me of a song I heard once on a tv show...Dancing by Elisa...you should check out the lyrics if you don\'t know the song...for some reason I feel they apply to the story and Hermione\'s POV...

someone should proof read this and get all the little,someone should proof read it

The story was great! I enjoyed most all of it and hope to see a sequel soon. It's not too late to write,

Robertk

This is so wonderful Kaze! You're an extremely talented writer, and as you promised a sequel to this, and left it on a horribly sad cliffhanger a LONG time ago, do you plan on writing the sequel, or have you decided not to?

I know many are anxiously waiting for the answer to that one.

*Pretty please with a cherry on top?*

Cheers, Bama

It's been over a year without a sequel! Are you planning on writing something else to continue this storyline?

That having been said, your writing is all fantastic. I look forward to reading more.

can't wait for the secqul.. what are you going to call it? or u contue to write upon this one? either way is fine

Interesting choice of narrative style...it's not just first person, it's more of a monologue than a straight narration. It works rather well for this story line. I don't think any other style would really work, now that I think about it.

Is the sequel posted? It doesn't seem to be listed on your fics page.

What's the sequel called? and can I just say... WOW?! OMG I LOVE IT... I have goosebumps.. and it's EVIL to end a story like that... GENIUS... but EVIL!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me know what the sequel is called...
thanks A BILLION *for the story and in advance for the sequel*

keep it up
-megz-

OMG!!! it was AMAZING, there were a few errors I saw, but it was AMAZING STILL.

I have goosebumps... WOW! you have an AMAZING gift. ... I'm-- I think I'm actually speechless. wow...

Keep it up *though there is NOT A SINGLE DOUBT in my mind that you won't*

-megz-

that was a cery shitt ending how can they not be together I hated it

awwwwwwwwwww thats the problem when u make friends with boys eh you have to struggle with the two

oh dear... re-reading stories always triggers my need for sequels... hint hint...

Okay, I'm not going to kill you, just yet.
I have to first point out that your writing is beyond spectacular. I'm jealous at how well you write.
I know I didn't comment on the first chapter, my fault, but I'm commenting on the story as a whole. The controversy between Harry,Ron and hermoine was very well crafted and written. It was a good way to split the trio apart, because the common Luna thing become quite bland.
From Hermoine's perspective, I can only say that her voice was written very well. You captured the essence of how I think Hermoine Granger is. A deep intellectual and emotional girl. Nice job. BUt I can't say muhc because I don't write as well as you do.
Keep writting, because if you don't add a sequel to this, there will be many out there sad.

that was intense and beautiful in an OMFG sort of way, if you know what i mean. i can't believe you don't have more reviews!!! i can't believe i've never heard of you!!!! this was brilliant, if just a little bit evil. what is the sequel then? oh i really hope it's out.
*goes off to check*