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Great fic, you got Harry and Hermione done to the max. I couldn’t have written it better myself. I cannot honestly wait for more of your fics. Great read, enjoyed it immensely. There are not enough words that I know of how to express how much I really, and I do mean really enjoyed reading this. |
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Great fic, you got Harry and Hermione done to the max. I couldn’t have written it better myself. I cannot honestly wait for more of your fics. Great read, enjoyed it immensely. There are not enough words that I know of how to express how much I really, and I do mean really enjoyed reading this. |
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Very cute story! The ending was perfect! It was too short, I wanted more! Anyway, great work! |
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tylerfottSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
I really enjoyed this one. I rarely read short fics like this but I for some reason decided to read some today. Great Work!  |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/05
What a sweet and sad one-shot.  Though the ending did bring a smile to my face (leave it to Ron  ) Great writing job. |
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very cute fic. the ending kinda reminds me of another story where they had a bet going on as to when they'd hook up [forgot the name of it, but was also a good fic]. don't get me wrong, i'm not accusing you of jocking! just giving my honest opinion..and i really do love it. |
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Author Feedback: Sadly, no, I wont be writing another chapter to this, it was just a quick one that I needed to get off my mind. If I get an idea, maybe
Thanks for reviewing!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/05
vERY GOOD. iTS JUST HAPPENING A LITTLE TOO QUICK, WITHOUT FURTHER EXPLANATION, DESCRIPTION. OTHERWISE I LIKED RONS ATTITUDE. VERY FUNNY. |
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Thank you for the time and effort that was put in to this story so far.This is a great story please keep it up.Also ignore any and all flames.
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So sweet and simple! I loved it...a nice quick read before bed! Great job! Keep up the great work. |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/05
Well, it's about time Ron won something. Twenty galleons is a lot of spending stuff. Nice to see someone write a fun ending. I wonder how badly the ferrett will take paying off Ron? Alorkin |
Author Feedback: My ending was sort of a last minute thing that popped into my head. Im glad you liked it!
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Wow! I loved this! Gotta wish it was longer, though.
*adds to favorites list* 
You're a really good writer! Try writing something longer next time! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much I am actually planning on writting something longer. I have an idea of where Im going with the story but I dunno where to start!
Thanks for reviewing ~ |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/05
You need to stretch your wings! good story but way too short, your plot is very good but you could have gone much more into characterization and story. Your writing is very good, try exploring a little more with the characters and you could write a more interesting story. It was good, though!
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Author Feedback: Hey! Thanks for the advice! This story was just a quick one that I wrote in under an hour. Im going to be starting a multi chapter length one next weekend because unfortunatly *sigh* i have midterms to study for and take plus the million projects that i have due.
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