GraceUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/05
 Loved the almost s ex scene  ....Very romantic, and non dirty. Usually I see those to be dirty and all that, but this was romantic, and fun. Very good. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/05
What a cute one-shot. I especially loved Hermione's ending line.  Liked the different premise that Harry's trying to protect Hermione until after the war. Sounds just like him. |
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never would've guessed they were married, hehe. i looove these fluffy fics. that was kinda like that one fic where they also tried to keep their marriage a secret and came up with a spell to hide their rings. i dunnos. loved it anyways! =D |
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Aww...they're really cute in this fic and the bit at the end surprised me a little. Great fic! |
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Awww! I totally love this one. I love the way you describe the image of the two sitting on the couch. |
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That was really cute! But one question...are they married or are they jsut engaged? Either way, it fits perfectly, and finishes the story just wonderfully. Great job, and maybe a sequel or an epilogue would be great! |
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AWWWW! That was cute! I liked it! It was very sweet and tasteful! Twp Thumbs up!! |
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A perfect story, period, for anytime of the year. You did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. |
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That was a sweet little story, especially with the invisible ring. I like the idea that they would keep the relationship quiet, keep the wizarding world's focus on important things, like Voldemort, rather than the superfluous of Harry's love life. |
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TalionSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/05
A really good story, but I have only one question. Are they married or engaged? It really wans't clear, unless that was your intent. |
Author Feedback: They are actually engaged. But no one really knows it. In fact, nobody knows that they are dating for that matter.
At least, that's what I was aiming for. |
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OHHH!! I loved it! it was so sweet and roamntic. Ron being the exception,of course, I mean that boy is hopeless... always putting his foot in his mouth.
Are they engages? I assume they have been together for a while now, uh?
Hope to see more of you rwork soon |
Author Feedback: They are actually engaged. But no one really knows it. In fact, nobody knows that they are dating for that matter.
At least, that's what I was aiming for. |
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Really good!!! Not too mushy. Please write more. I want to know more. What happens next!!?? |
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GK ErenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/05
Very sweet. I love how they tear apart when 'the red-haired boy' comes in. Ron always seems to be a little out of loop, not only in your fic, but also in the books and movies. You caught that perfectly! |
Author Feedback: I would love to say that I deliberately left him out of the loop because of how it's played out in the movies and the books, but then i would be lying.
But thank you for your lovely review |
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