HPHG4everSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/01/05
Huh? What is that bastard doing?! i am talking about DUMBledore! hmm Please slow down the pace of this story or you will be finished by chapter 5! update asap! will ya! |
Author Feedback: Dumbledore is being Dumbledore. I for one see him as a manipulative bastard who is willing to use any means to achieve an ends. I am working on the next update, but I don't know about slowing down the pace of the story. I'll try, but i don't know. Thanks for the review. |
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ridxwanUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/01/05
You know i want to argue about the first chapter, it has some ureasonable facts made by harry and hermione.
harry said thta its his destiny he would fight Voldemort one on one. It's true, i definitely agree with him. But he said is he thinks he will die then, he is thinking the cowards way out.
Hermione says she's going to be by his side in the fight. This is one thing she didn't know though, Harry one on one against Voldemort, period, no arguments, that's the way it is. If she wants to fight that its two on one, then it would be cheating and unfair, another cowards way out and like everyone is desperate to kill the one bad guy that couldn't die. everyone thought that after killing him, peace would come easily, wrong, look at our world for example... where's the peace? People need to think positive and straight esp Hermione... if you think a 2 on 1 situation againts Voldemort would help save the world, then you're dead wrong. She needs to believe him to win and come back, she needs to believe he could do this without dying, she needs to beleive he could do this by himself. and Harry too needs believe in his ally, people who sends him to Voldemort while fighting the Deatheaters and other dark creatures. He also needs to believe in miracles and life is not control by others and prophecy, he controls his life. Harry lastly needs to believe that he can do this despite what everyone's thinking. And all you H/Hr writers, stop make Harry Mr. pity himself, you all are ruining his image, you make him look like a dick. You're not a H/Hr supporter if you're so one sided on only hermione. |
Author Feedback: First of all, I never said that Hermione was going to face Voldemort, I said she wanted to fight with him. That does not automatically imply that Hermione thinks she is going to be facing Voldemort, only making sure Harry can get to him... it isn't like Voldemort would fight without his death eaters, and therefore someone needs to fend them off. Second of all, people will always hope that things will be peaceful and I don't think I am necessarily setting things up to happen that way... total peace is utopic and utopias don't have a way of working out. And I don't think for one second that Hermione is going to face Voldemort with Harry and bam! evil wizard is defeated. She does believe he is going to come back and win, Harry is the one who thinks he is going to die fighting ... Hermione is the one telling him that he needs to fight and give up the notion that he is going to die. And I do believe that the point that I made about the prophecy in the story is that it was up to interpretation and Hermione even says destiny is dynamic -- in simple terms, that means it changes and is not set in stone, each choice he makes determines his own destiny, and I made that pretty clear. And Harry is the one who doesn't believe in himself, everyone else does -- even Dumbledore thinks he is capable of defeating Voldemort, he just thinks love is getting in the way. And finally Harry is not pitying himself, nor is anyone else. Harry is doubting himself and his abilty to do what he has to do. Pity implies he feels sorry for himself, and I did not write a Harry who feels sorry for himself, nor do any of the characters take pity on him in this story. And I resent the fact that you blanked all H/Hr shippers and insinuate that we make him look like a dick! Have you read Order of the Phoenix, JKR did not write Harry as Mr. Sensitive, he was an angsty whiny character in that book who exhibited much of the same character traits that I have brought over into this story. And how am I being one sided on Hermione, exactly? I am paying equal attention to Harry and Hermione and have not taken away Harry's role as the hero. I enjoy the prospects of Harry and Hermione ending up together, but focusing on one or the other has no bearings on my support of a particular ship in a fandom.
And another thing, Harry does not think dying in order to defeat Voldemort is the cowards way out -- he sees it as a grandeios act of martyrdom: sacrificing himself for the greater good.
If you would like to continue this debate with me, feel free to do so. However, I am unsure of where some of your logic and thinking is coming from.
Thanks for taking the time to review, even if I completely disagree with most of what you have said. I really think you misunderstand what I have written.
Have a good day. |
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HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/05
this was an interesting chapter ...... to say the least! I did like it though, you did a good job. please up date soon. |
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This is a great start thank you for it.Cannot wait to see what else is in store for them. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I hope to work on the next chapter soon. Sorry it took so long to respond to this ... just catching up on some reviews now. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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That was great please keep up the great work.Thank you for the time and effort you have put in to this story.Ignore any and all flames.
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