Quite an excellent beginning to the second portion of your Intervention series, I'm sorry that it ended so soon after it begun.

I noticed that the formatting on the text changed abruptly toward the end of the third chapter, and there are some punctuation errors. I sincerely hope you'll continue this AU or not I must say its better than what JKR came up with for 6th and 7th year.

I just finished this, after (pardon the pun) wolfing the first one. I love the new, improved, backbone!Harry. I adore this new 'verse you've got here, and I'm so sorry that this story is paused. I look forward to a lovely long read through the rest of the Fenris library. Hope you come back to this gem someday!

I just finished re-reading both 'Intevention' and 'Intervention Part II: Nemico del mio Nemico' and I have to say they both get better with the second reading. I hope you finish and post the reworking of the first few chapters and the rest of the story soon. Keep up the excellent writing and I'll keeep an eye out for anything new you do.

Krissy :-)

Gripping chapter. I hope the story isn't abandoned, though it's been long enough since an update to believe it is.

Draco doesn't strike me as the type to listen to such a warning. He's a limit tester, and used to getting away with anything he wants. Not to mention he's convinced of his own superiority. He'll push, and wind up getting nailed. I can't see things happening any other way.

well then, is this story abandoned?, it has been 2 years.. oh well.I assume real life and other concerns outweigh stories and fantasy..

I really like this chapter. I hope the next one come soon

I hope you continue this story, I have enjoyed reading it.

I hope you continue this story, I have enjoyed reading it.

Quite interesting the history part about wizarding warfare, It's about time Harry took his life in his on hands an start doing something about it instead of depending on Dumbledore to take care of everything.

I hope you update soon. I really liked this story. Thanks!

Sorry, this isn't a review as such (feel free to delete it!) but I only just signed up and it won't let me add alerts without a review. Sorry again - but I really am enjoying your writing!

There was a lot of times throughout "Intervention" when I wanted to comment, but I figured I'd just read through what you've already written and comment at the end of it. After all, there's only so many times you can read "wow!! huzzah!" from the same person without getting bored.
I love how you've incorporated different rituals and beliefs into the main thread of the story, and I can't wait to see where you take it - especially when it comes to the new harder Harry (no innuendo intended).

Cheers!

- Karma

Hi!

I just re-discovered Intervention and Intervention Part II. I really like how this plot is running and was wondering if you're ever going to finish it... Here's to hoping!

I absolutely one of teh better Harry - Hermione fics out there. I can't wait to read the rest. Please update soon...

has this story died off i would really like to see it updated.