Gasp! That was incredible! The emotions were so strong and so intense and just wonderfully written! I loved it! I will have to sift through and read some of your other stories now!

Very nice story! I could see that happening in canon, right up to Ron leaving to escape the seemingly-inevitable explosion. Gorgeous, and keep up the good work!

You just know how to write a one-shot, I love your stories, they just make me feel so warm and tingly. You really capture the essence of Harry and Hermione's all-consuming love and need for each other. Great job as usual, I love how you wrote Harry's "I need you", that just speaks volumes on what Hermione means to him. And JKR said it herself, Harry needs Hermione badly. Loved it!
hammergal

Yeah, she'd given him the power he knows not. =D But of course, because please, what else could it be? (Perhaps something other than from a H/Hr-shipper's point of view, I guess.)

Anyway, this was really well-written and the line: "It was a kiss of promise" was extremely well put. For lack of another adjective: Awesome.

Great story...just wish it wasn't a one-shot! (Although, I could say that about a lot of other one-shots I've read!)

I loved observant!Ron:

"Oddly, he never thought of it as Harry and Hermione ‘fighting’. ‘Fighting was what he and Hermione did, the usual sharp bickering over minor things that didn’t really matter. Harry and Hermione didn’t do that. No, they disagreed over big things. And when they did, the argument was always the same sort- intense, passionate, feelings and emotions and fears from the deepest part of their hearts… All-consuming."

Great description of a very "mature" H/Hr relationship, while showing the differences between that and R/Hr...The reason that H and Hr disagree is BECAUSE they care for each other/need each other...but then, you already knew that!

Thanks!

What a great one-shot. Loved the ending...where there was hope for Harry now. Can't wait for your next story...I've enjoyed them all.

Oh, that was so sweet.

I never thought about the fact that Harry has probably never been told that someone loves him. Poor guy.

That was an excellent story. It was remarkably in character, and as sweet as sugar without being overly cutesy or tacky.

Well done.

Wow, that was intense! Ron was smart to get out of the room. He might have been scorched.

Great job! I think oblivious!Harry may just need this kind of aha! moment to figure out his feelings in the end. I keep thinking perhaps she'll be in the ultimate danger at the end and he'll realize what he's had right in front of him all this time. But I'd rather it was your way...a bit before the final battle.

I'm trying to work out in my head how he goes about defeating Voldemort (or a plausible way, at least) - not because I want to ruin the surprise, but because I'm trying to write a 7th year story and that seems to be necessary. *shrugs* It's not easy. The whole power he knows not thing...I can see love being more important than Harry realizes but the mechanics are getting in the way. This story is a nice reminder of one possible way...which is the trio together, side by side to fight Voldemort in the end, instead of Harry being alone like every other time.

I can't imagine Harry's fear here...having to face the bastard AND having to worry about what Tom might do to Hermione. Only stubborn Hermione could back Harry down on this one.

Sorry...rambling. Thanks for sharing such an emotionally charged scene with us.



jane

oh my gosh! that was so good! are you doing another chapter?

I loved this! Passionate fights and confessions of love make for a very good combination. I liked how Harry reacted to Hermione's confession and the fact that she realizes that he's never heard those words spoken to him before. Great fic.

You should do more chapters of this; this fic is very promising. I wanna see him fight Voldemort...! please?
Another thing; how many stories do you really have here? I mean, I see this huge list down there!
Take care,
quizgirl

Wow! That was just wow. But I'm not suprised. After all you ARE Bingbolt.

I love fanfics with Harry and Hermione disagreeing. Like you had written, those arguments are intense with so much emotion and passion.
I just felt it reading your work.

Wonderful simply wonderful.
If only this would happen in canon...

Cheers,
Mycha

PS Hope to read more of your stuff soon.

Wow, I loved this. It vaguely reminded me of the fight Harry and Hermione had before they left for the DoM. I could see this happening in the next two books =) Amazing job on this!

Great job!!! Just like how I would picture it. You wrote it out beautifully!!!

One word...speechless. The emotions in that were so intense. I had tears of emotion running down my face, that was an amazing story. I've read all of yours actually, but I really enjoyed this one!