lauhallSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/02/08
That was really sweet, I really liked it, it's just the way I always pictured it, you did an amazing job. Congrats |
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BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/02/06
That was a nice story. I really liked Ron's reaction at the beginning. Great Job! |
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h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/05
This is a brialliant piece. I just love it!!! COngrats and keep it up! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/04/05
Are you going to continue this story? please do! it's really good. |
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RamychanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/05
This was excellent. I really loved how you described how Harry and Hermione "disagree." I totally "agree" with you! |
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 I really enjoyed it. A nice, believeable insight as to why Harry and Hermione are so in love. Yay! |
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dazzleboxUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/05
That was lovely. You've done a very nice job of portraying their passion and intensity, and I was wiping a tear by the end of it. Very good. |
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Oh, that was really sweet! I was almost crying, but I'm kind of a sucker for stuff like this. Your story was beautiful, nice work. |
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i love the intensity and pace of this, very believable, you could SO see them arguing like that. wish it would happen like that in the real series AND they'd end up kissing. |
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Aww that was such an adorable story!! I absolutley loved it! Sorry I couldnt respond sooner I havent had internet since like forever but I do love the story! Hope you write some more stories sooN! |
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What a beautifully touching, emotion filled story. So well written, you have a great talent in conveying emotions. |
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Ah, so very nice, Sarah. This truly is a "wished for in Book 6" scene.
I loved how it started out with Ron backing out of the room, almost as if he knew where the arguement was going. And both Harry and Hermione being the stubborn-natured people they are, I can see this arguement really happening between them.
And the last lines are my favorite: Hermione had, he realized, given him something else tonight, as precious as her love. She had given him hope.
That's what we're all wishing for. |
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That was just wonderfuL! I thought the entire thing was kept well in character and could actually see something like this taking place in HBP. Let's hope its done half as well as you did it!
Thanks! |
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puck_ncSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/05
That was a lovely story, extremely in character for both Harry and Hermione (and even Ron, ducking out to avoid the imminent explosion). I got tears in my eyes at the mention of how Harry has never heard anyone tell him they love him, not that he remembers. While the conversation may not go quite this way, it's one that has to happen sometime in the last two books.
Wonderful read. Thank you! |
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