harry31Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/06
 this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter |
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ElleranUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/05
I didn't even read the story--I hate fanfics like this one. I just noticed the title and it reminded me of a shirt my mum wore the other day. It said "To plagiarize or not to plagiarize. There is no question." I thought it was pretty cool! |
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Kaydeek70Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/04/05
you know story could be something for anyone that has lost someone that they love, you need to live each day you need to get up and go on and live you life th person that has died wouldn't want you to not live... I want to thank you for this Story I lost my Dad last month and reading this has made me think that he wouldn't want me to stop doing what I love or what he taught me to do so because of your story I'm going to stop mopping around start to live my life the way he would want me to live |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I am glad that you found hope in this story. I guess that is the best thing that I could ever expect from something I've written.
Sorry to hear about your bereavement. May the Lord grant you the strength to remain strong in this moment of sadness.
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Normaly one of my reviews would start with 'OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOOO GOOD.' but this is too well written for that. it was moving in a way i haven't read before. your war a wonderful author and i wish you the best of luck in the future.
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PS, the reason i read this fic is because a friend of mine drew a picture based on it. just thought you should know. |
Author Feedback: Well, if you're talking about Alorkin who drew the picture, then I do have a copy of his work on my comp, and I think it's really good. If it's someone else, I'd like to see his work.
Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked this.
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/05
Hello, Sauron.
I read this whenyou forst wrote it. I cried through it,and again, today. You know from other reviews, that I have buried many friends. I would like to do a drawing/painting of the scene in this story where Harry holds Hermione's body. I may also doone of him conversing with her echo. I hopeyo0u don't mind. If you do, would you please let me know? I can be reached at: Alorki@msn.com
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/05
That was a beautiful fic. I would've cried had you continued. It's really sad what happened with the tsunami victims. i just loved this pic. Keep it up!! take care |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/05
awww this is sad...and VERY sweet of you to write a fanfic on this! Good work! It evoked enough feeling for me so that I had tears in my eyes! GREAT WRITING and yah...for the tsunami victims...may their souls reside in peace. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/05
Wow - that was a very powerfully written piece of fiction. Angsty, yes, but very well done. Good job. |
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I really enjoyed it, it was extremely well written. reminded me a bit of LOTR (I know, gasp, LOTR mentioned on an HP site?) anyways, It was angsty but not overly so. very nice work |
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I love this story. It hit a spot deep in my heart. I'm almost crying right now. It has to be one of the best ficlets I've read. |
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Ftmble1Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/05
Wow. I think the Author's note is the one most telling and sad. Thank you for all the work that you're doing helping where help is needed. I hope that these stories help you deal with the sadness you encounter. Peace to you. |
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Thanks for sharing SoM....that was very moving and exteremly well done and as you pointed out where the idea came from, fiting. Keep up all the good works. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review.
Yeah, the story is quite moving, isn't it? I mean I do wish we could help that man somehow. You know, he stayed there on the beach for two nights waiting for his wife to be saved. And then the third morning, he said that he had this dream in which her soul told her to carry on. That was the first time we met him, when we were having our lunch at one of the relief camps. There were many inspirational people that we met there, ordinary people who became heroes, but I personally thought that this was simply the most extraordinary story.
Thanks once again for the review.
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That was sad.That was great please keep up the great work.Thank you for the time and effort you have put in to this story.Ignore any and all flames.
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I agree myself, that was sad. Especially since the source was sad. I really wish we could do something there.
Anyways, once again thanks for the review and I appreciate that you like my work.
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dreamer43Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/05
hey. that was really sad. the imagery you created was brilliant and lifelike, and the fall of hogwarts and how you described it was beautiful. i never thought of the priori incantetum in that way before. it was really good having hermione give comfort and hope to harry, and for them to be able to say a proper goodbye. it was a lovely and sad fic. excellently written. great job.
Later Days...
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I believe this is the first time I have been complimented on the imagery. Thanks for that.
I am toying with the idea of adding another chapter to this. Something about Harry's death. But it's still in the 'planning' stage.
Thanks once again for the review.
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