Just finished reading this hehe, took me two days. I liked this one, I wish I had your writing abilitys. Well keep up with the great work..

I loved this story. I remember how frustrated I was at James and how relieved I was when he finally asked. This was written great. Reviewing to add to favorites.

I loved this story. I remember how frustrated I was at James and how relieved I was when he finally asked. This was written great. Reviewing to add to favorites.

I have a question...how come you were blessed with incredible writing skills, and i have to try SO hard to get out a marginal story?
I find it incredibly unfair...but then again...if all people were good writers then it would completely ruin the reading of a great story...such as the ones you have authored.
Well...as the first two books in this series...THIS WAS INCREDIBLE...i NEVER got bored...i NEVER thought oh great, here we go again with James' incredible stupidity...and i NEVER EVER got sick of reading it
if it were actually a book, i'd call it a page-turner; however, it's NOT a book (though it should be), i have no idea what to call it
KEEP ON WRITING
everyone hopes you never stop
i'm guessing someday you'll become a famous novelist...but until then i hope you enjoy reading these crazy reviews!!!
until the end of your next story,
TTFN
Luv Yas
Andri

This, by far, has to be my favorite of your Lily'James series. It's quite realistic and instead of a short, pointless fic, where he asks her after two chapters, you stretch it out with fights, and new boyfriends. I really like this one! ^_^

I would like to thank you for writing this story! It is excelente! I found it on a day that I needed a boost! I haven't laughed this hard in a LONG time!

*rolls over laughing* Chicken shit =D Funny stuff.
But it was also really good, I have to give you your props here

I loved the story. It was amazing. I can't wait to keep reading.

that last bit in this final chapter was a surprise, and really good surprise! Glad to see that everyone is still writing, no matter what certain websites have put them through! Keep up the amazing, creative work!

wow! This is realllllly good! I just read the whole thing in one day. I sure wasn't expeecting the R rated eending.

This was a reall truly excellent fic, and I give you my official 2 thumbs up. Good job.

Any one, who can portray an L/J the way i want, is my hero. You did this.

Thankyou, please bless the portkey with more of your fics.

Luv,
angie_

This is really good! I really like your stories!! i liked that chapter
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kaci

First off, i loved Deer to Me, Heading the School, and now this story and i am really looking forward to reading the final one (which i'm about to go do right now even though i'm not sure if its finished.) I think i started reading Deer to Me on Sunday or Monday and now it's Friday. I must say that thats probably the fasted i have read 3 fanfics of this length. i can usually read books pretty quickly but thats because i can stay up til 4am reading them when i'm supposed to be sleeping... computers dont work that way. i have spent every waking moment that my dad is not on the computer working reading your stories and i LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, I really like how you find a song that fits the chapter for the title and put a little excerpt that best suits the chapter so that people who haven't heard the song can get an idea of where the title came from. I also LOVE that some of the chapter titles are country song as many people (very weird ones i might add) hate country, so any promotion of country music is awesome!!!!!! I love the song "friends in low places" that you used as for this fic and there's so many other that i love.. and i just love your writing in general so keep at it!!!!!
XOXOwinnie

Writing journal?? please email me back about whatever it is ur talking about and put something in the subject about fanfic or something so i'll know its not junk!! thanx!!!
XOXOwinnie

"POOF!" lol that was quite funny... wanted to go poof (aka apparate) so she just kept saying poof!! anyway i loved the earlier stories and i love this one too so keep up the good work!!
XOXOwinnie

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? "We need a break." what is that?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! That's crazy is what it is!!!!!!!!!!!! or wait... maybe she's having a nightmare? cuz james saying that would not make sense... unless its important to the story in which case... continue!
XOXOwinnie