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owanalilypotter
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 28/11/08
Oh my GOD!! How i managed to even READ this chapter is beyond me! Ooooh PLEASE let Lily and James get back together soon cuz I am DYING HERE!!!
 

owanalilypotter
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 27/11/08
WHAT FRESH HELL!?!?!?!?!Why-why-wh-wh-why-w-WHY!?!? Why did James say THAT instead of asking to marry her!?!?!? ARGH!!! Ok, ok deep breaths...it's gonna be alright...it's gonna work out in the end....

ahem, sorry about my little crazy moment there, but I literetally felt my heart sink down to my navel when I read that last line. The only think that keeps me from pulling my hair out is the fact that, well, we all KNOW James and Lily will get together in the end right? I mean how else is Harry supposed to be born and save the wizarding world? Well, I'm off to read the next chapter! (PLEASE let James and Lily get back together soon!
 

charmedlily
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
hey great chapter. I LOVE you're stories about Lily and James. Keep it up. - charmedlily
 

Sayvorie
Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 16/07/06
Rofl. You have to love Lily and James fanfics, more freedom than you'll find anywhere else, except of course the ending, unfortunately that always has to stay the same. I think the phrase, 'Cooking the Beans' will always be stuck in my head and very possibly in a few years and I'm actually settled and out of college I'll be able to shock and confuse various family members by coming home and announcing that I have, infact, finally eaten the beans. Or uhm....well, I'm a girl so I really don't think it's the most conventional thing to do for me to cook the beans.
 

bubblybubble
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 03/12/05
this one story was hilarious, i really liked how James found it impossible to propose to Lily, this is one of my favorites. XD
 

Dificult
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 11/09/05
lils reaction was priceless! i absaloutly loved it and i can just imagine a fiery red head screaming her guts out at james and severus! great job. -lauren
 

Oi
Unsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 01/09/05
do you speak swedish? I'm swedish and I was really stunned when the swedish minister arrived and actually spoke swedish, you didn't even have spelling errors.
Det var roligt på svenska. Jag tycker inte att svenska språket är roligt ( nja, kanske ibland) men när Håkan skrek på svenska att Lily skulle dra så skrattade jag tills jag grät =).

Yes, I'm the ninkanpoof woman.

Author Feedback: Nej, my best friend is Swedish and I made her translate. I have her locked in my closet and whip her when I need to know what something is in Swedish.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 31/08/05
Wow, I absolutly loved your fic up until now.
Rowlings James Potter, would never, let me repeat, he would never call Lily Evans a bitch.

Your decription of the characters was alot american before. With the american Friends sitcom act and jokes you pulled. It was fun, it was infact brilliant, You managed to portray their friendship. How Sirius starts to misstrust Remus. How nobody seems to suspect Peter. How they talk of betrail in suck an easy joking matter that leaves us chilled. But I think you really went over the line now. The whole chapter was set. I knew what you were aiming for when everything started going wrong for James. We all know they will get married. But to turn James into this american teve drama slob who eventually gets his act together is disgusting.
The words that come out of their mouths - and from your brain, mostly, genius- was not valid.

I demand that you change the word "bitch" to "nincanpoof"................please
Author Feedback: Well, I appreciate the feedback, but I think you have to understand that Rowlings' characters were watered down for the children's series. I don't quite remember what part it was that James called her a bitch, but I think that one so hurt would say things that they don't mean.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 25/08/05
What was Snape going to say? Also, what writting journal? Can you e-mail me and tell me? By the way, great story so far!
 

katiebaby7292
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 24/08/05
Very, very awesome! I am currently reading all of this stories, and I must say I am impressed!
 

dificult
Unsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 19/08/05
WHAT DID YOU DO?!!!! he was going to say it! Poor Lils. Evil yet ingenius authors.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 18/08/05
WTF!?! WHAT!?! WHATTTT!?! Oh HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU!?! I hate you
 

sExYaZnBlOnDy
Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 04/08/05
this is a great story.. i love it!!! i love how you have the "break" during their relationship.. it is nice to know that they have been through a lot to be with each other i can't wait to read the rest of the storys u have
 

AboveAllThingsLove
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/05
I was just adding this story to my favorites. Again, I love it!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 31 | Date : 25/06/05
I give you two thumbs up!!! You should repost it on FF.net
 

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