awww......... *sniffles* this is soo angsty... it's well... quite heart breaking in a way... lol....
but it's a nice little ficcy..

nice

absolutely adoreable. i love. i love sooo much. i really have a thing for little one-shot mini fics like this, and i just thought it was really cute. nice work ^^

aww that was cute

This was amazing! Absolutely amazing!

Or as Fred and George would say, "Absoluetly corking!"

LOL

I loved it! It was brilliant! I hope to see more stories from you in the future!!!!!

~*~RonJrsGurl1405~*~

great story! please continue! your such a great writer!

i loved it!! wahoo, yes great fic. i love the way it was written, how you didnt really use their names until the end. wheee! i liked the whole thing in general, wow i sound stupid heheh. but how he was all mad and was like harry potter grrr...'cause that was great. ok im going to stop now because i sound like a moron. lovely job and keep writing, your great!

-jessica

hey this is the beginning of not a bad fic...

keep the good work coming!;-)

:-)

This was a beautifully written story! I have to say, that it leaves me wanting more. I still feel that their relationship may be doomed. They have so much to overcome. Your writing style is lovely. I really encourage you to write more.



--Tegan

Very very good. I loved it. Very sad, but absolutely amazing..right more maybe?

WOWWIES! That was WONDERFUL Sid! I really loved it *sigh* PLEASE write more smut, and yes it was smutty enough for me ^_^ You were brilliant, and if you ever need me to alpha/beta something (*hint hint*) all you need to do is ask!

Ooooo. Nice.



I am a huge fan of angst, and well, you know how I feel about smut . . .



Very well done.

Well... I don't usually read D/G, you know... But seeing as it was you, I decided why not? So, yadda yadda, nice job, yadda yadda. I don't know what to say. I like your narration and interaction. Anyways... Well... I'll just stop before I seem too silly. *sigh* I wish they had like a 9.5...

Finally!!! And a nice one too i might add!! their is lack of some nice angsty stuff around the globe i tell you. We need more of the angsty stuff. Anyway, very nice story. 714, doooo try to write some fluff too!!! maybe it will help you to go to the ultimate end...(wink)



the quote made the day for me,



*Her family was loving, accepting, and wonderful. His was arrogant, rude, hateful, and vengeful*

OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVED IT!!!