okay... what's going on then? will that be explained ... i want to find out what else happened AND of course what will happen! but they do get each-other. they will! oh please, just tell me they will!  i like your story!  |
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that was good it really was i can't wait to know what happens next |
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wow.... i'm amazed! sounds like a really good story and i'm looking forward to what's coming next!  i want to know what happened and why. oh ... i love those stories ... i love it when you have to go on reading to find out the whole tuth ... even if it makes me a nervous wreck sometimes!  so prepare yourself - i'll continue reading and let you know what i think!  |
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HPFAN1Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/04/05
Very Very Good. Cant wait for another update. Please hurry. Peace |
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Wonderful story! Love your story line. Kind of confusing right now but very intriguing and suspensful. Can't wait until the next chapter is up! Lady Chancellor |
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ohh good start on a story. im eager to see what happens next. |
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Hey awesome beginning!! This is shaping into a great amazing story, that I will eventually become addicted to. I can't wait to read the rest... ALTHOUGH I am a teeny bit confused... am I supposed to be??
SO when is the next chapter coming?? |
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And you're supposed to be.  |
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Wow. Wasn’t expecting that. If there’s any story I’ve read that I couldn’t at least make a good guess about its plot from the first chapter/prologue, it’s this one. I had no idea what was going to be revealed in this chapter, and I’m still not sure I get all of it. But I’ll wait patiently for the next chapter and hope that more is explained. Ooh, who am I kidding? I can’t wait patiently. This chapter had/has me so interested. I’m ready to burst from the suspense. I really can’t wait to read more. |
Author Feedback: *laughs*
Thanks for reviewing! It'll become clearer, eventually.  |
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Oooooh...suspense  Me likey  Another well done chapter, sheesh Harry can be such a bitch. But I have a question...why and how did Harry get the bloody dark mark on him? |
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*zips lips*
Thanks for reviewing, though.  |
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HdawneSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/01/05
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Nice nice chappy  Seriously, very descriptive, very emotional. I only need to point out that it's St.Mungos not St.Mungoes. |
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Thanks!
Oh, thanks so much for that, I'll be sure to correct it in the future. |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/01/05
This is intriguing. I first read this some time ago, before I realised it was considered polite to review. I think you have an interesting story here. Why is Harry wearing the dark mark? Why does Hermione hate him? Where is Ron? Most importantly, What happened? Alorkin |
Author Feedback:  All very good questions. |
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OMG this is too awesome! I love your writing style! It's so deep and mysterious-kewlness! I hope this is going to be a nice and long fic...*hint hint*....update soon!!!!!! |
Author Feedback:  It shall be! Thanks so much |
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oooh.. i like this.. i can't wait to read more.. keep up the great work! update soon... i need to know more!!! |
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SeK19005Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/01/05
wow.. i hadn't expected that..he has to go back, he just has to.. poor hermione, i mean seriously she needs harry. i can't wait to read what else you have planned for the rest of the story. esp when harry and hermione get back together. great job! |
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Thanks.
*will not give away anything* |
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