Oh, what a wonderful fic! I had a grin on my face from ear to ear, by the time I came to the end. It was so sweet, and fluffy. Just perfect. Keep up the great work and I hope to see an update soon for Day by Day... Woo hoo!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/05
awww... come on you better not be leaving it off here!
wonderful writing
write another! |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
This was a lovely story, and went wonderful with the holiday season. I always hate seeing Hermione with anyone else and I am always so happy when she finally realizes it was Harry all along that she loved. |
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geekgurlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
Hey, i really like this story! you did a really good job with it and i liked the plot. good job! |
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trutonksSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
Good one, JanieB! Nice Christmas story. I don't like Harry and Hermione arguing but this worked especially since it all worked out in the end so nicely! But JealousHarry! is always good. Now get to work on "Day by Day"!
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Author Feedback: Thanks muchly!!! Would you believe, now that I have that little plot bunny off my back I've been typing the next chapter of "Day by Day" like one possessed! Thanks again for the review!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx |
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LivUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
I have absolutely no idea whether or not I'm a pervert or not--I'm just something of a fourteen year old git. Um, sorry, for some reason I just couldn't read the story. It was really drawn out and long. I think I'd recomend shortening it a bit, you know. A story really doesn't need that much detail unless absolutely definately totally completely astoundingly obviously needed. Good luck on future stories, and A Happy New Year! Luv You! |
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I thought it was just fantastic. Just a few little grammar mistakes (just one that I remember, actually), but very, very cute. And realistic, methinks.
Great job.  |
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awww that was cute...welll the ending was...and the middle...the beggining was good lol well great story kk byebye |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
Very enjoyable one shot. Liked the idea of H/H being the ones always arguing. Great story! |
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Poor Harry. So completely and utterly devoted to her, even when he can't have her. It's SO sweet. Sigh...  The romantic in me just LOVES stories like this. I'm glad it was driving you crazy. Then we got to read it! YAY!  And YAY for the next chapter of "Day by Day". Can't wait!! Happy New Year! |
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Wonderful little one-shot. I really liked how all the characters interacted with each other and Harry's desperate attempt not to interfere with Hermione and Alex, because he wanted her happiness above all else. A very happy Christmas indeed, though.  |
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That was a really sweet Christmas fic. I'm not usually drawn to one-shots, but this one was really good. Great job! |
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That was amazing(spelling?).Thank you for this great story.This is a wounderful story please keep it up.Ignore any and all flames please. |
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KirstiRSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
Oh Lady Jane, I'm so glad you gave into the plot bunny and wrote this story! What a wonderful surprise--I had insomnia, decided to post an update to my story, and found a new fic from one of my very favourite authors!
I will continue to await updates on "Day by Day," but this story was lovely!  A great piece of yummy fluff *smiles happily* I loved the way you portrayed the trio--very accurate and true to canon! |
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