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MDR
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/05
Actually, I feel sorry for Alex. Ron said that he seemed to really love Hermione, he didn't seem to be abusive or horrible in any way. If he seemed a bit short regarding Harry...well, it is hard to fight for the love of a woman when your opponent is the woman's close friend. Heck, if the girl I am dating were to act the way Hermione was, I'd get upset too.

So Harry and Hermione end up together, that is great. Alex, not a bad guy, gets his heart trampled on in the worst way...finding his supposed girlfriend making out with another guy.

Not sure what you can do about it now. Oh well. Well writen and interesting. Hermione should have felt more badly about cheating on Alex and hurting him (she seemed to get over it pretty quickly....a very cold thing to do), and it would have added a bit more angst if Harry didn't hate Alex so much (if he thought Alex was a good guy, he would have been more disgusted at his own actions, but unable to stop them), but all in all a good story. Just be careful not to stomp on the little characters in the future, they have feelings too.
 

harrynmione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/05
Oh, what a wonderful fic! I had a grin on my face from ear to ear, by the time I came to the end. It was so sweet, and fluffy. Just perfect. Keep up the great work and I hope to see an update soon for Day by Day... Woo hoo!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/05
awww... come on you better not be leaving it off here!
wonderful writing
write another!
 

Mary6707
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
This was a lovely story, and went wonderful with the holiday season. I always hate seeing Hermione with anyone else and I am always so happy when she finally realizes it was Harry all along that she loved.
 

geekgurl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
Hey, i really like this story! you did a really good job with it and i liked the plot. good job!
 

trutonks
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
**sighs** That was soooo unbelievably wonderful!!! I mean, perfect timing, not rushed, so H & Hr. I give it
 

hammergal
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
Good one, JanieB! Nice Christmas story. I don't like Harry and Hermione arguing but this worked especially since it all worked out in the end so nicely! But JealousHarry! is always good. Now get to work on "Day by Day"!
hammergal
Author Feedback: Thanks muchly!!! Would you believe, now that I have that little plot bunny off my back I've been typing the next chapter of "Day by Day" like one possessed! Thanks again for the review!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx
 

Liv
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
I have absolutely no idea whether or not I'm a pervert or not--I'm just something of a fourteen year old git. Um, sorry, for some reason I just couldn't read the story. It was really drawn out and long. I think I'd recomend shortening it a bit, you know. A story really doesn't need that much detail unless absolutely definately totally completely astoundingly obviously needed. Good luck on future stories, and A Happy New Year! Luv You!
 

MedeaArduinna
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
I thought it was just fantastic. Just a few little grammar mistakes (just one that I remember, actually), but very, very cute. And realistic, methinks.

Great job.
 

harry4NDhermione4eva
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
awww that was cute...welll the ending was...and the middle...the beggining was good lol well great story kk byebye
 

jchaser
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
Very enjoyable one shot. Liked the idea of H/H being the ones always arguing. Great story!
 

HarrynHermione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
Poor Harry. So completely and utterly devoted to her, even when he can't have her. It's SO sweet. Sigh... The romantic in me just LOVES stories like this. I'm glad it was driving you crazy. Then we got to read it! YAY! And YAY for the next chapter of "Day by Day". Can't wait!! Happy New Year!
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
Wonderful little one-shot. I really liked how all the characters interacted with each other and Harry's desperate attempt not to interfere with Hermione and Alex, because he wanted her happiness above all else. A very happy Christmas indeed, though.
 

meg2089kul
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
That was a really sweet Christmas fic. I'm not usually drawn to one-shots, but this one was really good. Great job!
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/04
That was amazing(spelling?).Thank you for this great story.This is a wounderful story please keep it up.Ignore any and all flames please.
 

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