Well, the story is a little vague. I wasn't sure who was the one cheating and who was the one being cheated on. I wouldn't really call this good but it was interesting enough for me to leave a comment on...

She talk about home... i'm thinking something like this: Harry living at the Granger's in a summer break or the two of them living together little after Hogwarts. A walk in a park... and your story begin

Bye

I hate fics like this, it so short and it could be about anyone

Erm... very short. Try to make it longer next time.

Oh dear, this was absolutely PERFECT. I love it to death, honestly. *prints*

I don't even know what about it is, maybe the mental image of Hermione being caught. And the line: His hands were definitely in something, but it wasn't a cookie jar.

Hmm...interesting. Rather amusing in how it leaves everything but the most basic of setups about the situation to the reader's mind. Could be set during their Hogwarts years or sometime after. All we know is that they were being 'naughty' little love birds. ^_^ Great (very short) little fic!

LOL! This was very original and cute! I liked it...very nice style and form!

Um...I like it. I had to read it twice to get it, so I'm surprised that I like it. It's both vague and concrete at the same time, and I'm not terribly sure what to make of that. The writing is solid - you've got that whole "stream of consciousness" down quite well, and that really works here. The story, if it can be called that, is so vague that my mind is working overtime trying to fit what situation to put this stream of consciousness with, but at the same time, I really do not want a sequel or anything that might possibly explain this for me. (I have to admit to wanting a companion piece, but that's just because I'm insatiable.)

Great work here, I guess I should say, but really, I'm not sure. I do like it, though. ^_^

hmmmmmmm...i'm not really sure what to make of it, but i liked it all the same...
::runs of to ponder::
Y NaffiT?

lol. thats really cute and funny. Is well written. I love how you give a nice building block for the readers mind to build on. While certian things are... well certian. Others can be left purely to the readers imagination. Again well done

there is no way to describe it! i'm not even sure what i think of it!?! that will leave me thinking for a long time!
Emily

Wow, that was really origional! I really liked that! It was really cryptic while being slap-in-the-face obvious. Paradoxial. And I loved that!

Thank you for this story.That was great keep up the great work and enjoy your self.Please ignore any and all flames and have fun when you write.

That was curious. And sorta interesting. I'm not sure what it was (although I THINK they got sprung in like a broom closet or something??) Original thinking but confusing writing.
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx
PS I've just noticed you've written quite a few fics and I haven't read any so perhaps I'm just on the outside here.

ugh, it's hard to read with the grey text, get it changed to black