This made me laugh SO hard! Especially the last line: (Anybody know where Ron went?)

Hahahahahaha!

LOL!!!! This fic was sooo frickin funny! you should write more like this i was laughing for 5 min after reading!

hahaha, I loved it! It's absolutely right. And I think everyone should be able to laugh at their own cliche' fanfic, don't you? lol

Thank you. I knew I would love this the minute you said you refused to let your favorite character Sirius die. He was my favorite too and I cried for hours when he died. This is the FUNNIEST thing I have EVER read; plus it's so TRUE. Oh my God I could not stop laughing. I love your dramatic ones but this is great. I don't think it's POSSIBLE for you to write a bad fanfic. I love everything about this!

I loved that story. It was SOOO funny. I loved it, good job

Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I was imagining it on a theatre stage and a spotlight on the narrator in the side as the scene plays out on a bare stage. Why? I have no idea. I was also imagining green cats. Bravo!

Bit late on the review here... like 2 years.. but that was AWESOME! God that was funny, and confusing I must say but funny nonetheless. LOL!

oh man.. this is so hilarious. great job. i totally know what you mean with all of this. this was really refreshing because the fics do seem to get redundant after a while....

Oh..my freepin' Gawd! That was effin' hilarious! I crying tears of pure mirth over here. You gotta get the next one out soon. Bloody Brilliant...

Pam

*rofl* just... perfect
(... but I still have to babble a bit to get the requiered ten words...)
Thanks for posting

Lie

hahahahahahaham, this is truly hilarious.. i absolutely love the sarcasm!!!

Granger's Twin

That was the most hilarious thing I have ever read on Portkey! Are you going to do another one? If so, I look forward to it!

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved this. As much as I love H/Hr fics and I've been able to read through many a fic with barely-there plots just for the pumpkin-ness this really had me in stitches. Good job!

ahhh omg i lurrrrve you for writing this ever so clever story and its funnyness...where did ron go? loved mary sue..

must celebrate this occasion !! this was the first fic i have read since returning from the deep pit called late work and overdue book reports!!!!yeha.... good fic.... loved it... wonderful... *showers you with awesomely awesome compliments....* keep up the good work... and now onto your other fics .... may they be as good as this one was.... if not better!!!!
Hannah X.
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