Brilliant Story.

The plot is very complex so far. I look forward to your continuation of the story.

The only suggestion I have is to increase the amount of emotion that the characters feel. Currently, you have a few references to the feelings of the characters. If you increase the number of -ly words at the end of the spoken dialogue, the reader will have a better understanding of the emotional journey of the characters, not just the physical and psychological.

Thanks for the chapter.

Very well done. I expect great things from you, terrible things, but great.

You always leave us at the end of a chapter gasping! (Talented that way!) I can't wait to see where this is going! I really hope that both Hermione and Harry grow in strength and knowledge together.

Whoa! Now the story has gotten *really* interesting! Leave it to Hermione to have all of the background information needed. And what an interesting place to put a portkey.

Now I'm really hooked! I'm ready for the accelerated journey! I can't wait for the next part!

awesome so far, i can't wait to read more, i really enjoy your stories

an accelerated journey to the next chapter eh??

well then, full speed ahead

awesome chapter mate, keep up the amazing work

and now, i am on towards morning, through means of my bed

peace

Josh

is the voice behind them merlin?--- I really love your writing and always being able to fill me uo with suspense and an eagerness i didn't know existed. your writig maks me feel like an invisible visitor into the story that captures me!

WHAT??????? where's the next chapter? please please continue SOON!!! this is a very, very good story! I like the confidence you've placed on hermione, and how she's taking the leadership role, and not harry's smart, but shy lackey. the plot so far is well thought out; with no gaps between the chapters, and their emotions are believable, not over used, but not understated. Continue please!!!

So, they've been pulled to a bizarre Pensieve and are now meeting Merlin. For it would have to be him if it were infinity, which in a way is making him into a god as he exists outside of time.

Definitely a fascinating story, looking forward to more.

Oh, also, didn't expect that you were so young to be worrying about AP classes. Consider it a complement. Calculus is not so bad, then again, my bachelor's is in physics.

This was a very interesting chapter. Looking forward to the next one, update soon!

That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.

'nother good chapter... i read the beta version and you still didnt finish the chapter... but this is a good place to cliffhang... lol... im glad you used my merlin facts ^_^ ... keep up the story.... and nice use of latin stuff... very mythical....
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keep up the story... dont stop... your writing is always enjoyable to read -Mike c

Cliffhanger is an understatement. Amazing work as usual, the way you describe everything is... Just wow. Great job, I want to find out who the person is!

~Liv ^_^

that was a great chapter. i can't wait for the next one

wow

mate, you are seriously amazing

great story, sorry about how long it took me to review though

keep up the awesome work!

laterz

Josh