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I don't know how the hell I missed this story but whoa, this was HOT!!!!! You had me leaning closer and closer to the screen wanting to find out more. You did an outstanding job with word visualization. I was floored by your story. Certainly one of the best I've read in a long time. Great job.
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Author Feedback: "...I was floored by your story...."
And I am floored by your comment - thank you so much, you've put a huge smile on my face.  |
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gal-texterUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
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Author Feedback: There's a rec? Eeep. *is easily embarrassed*
I'm very glad you liked it - thanks for the two thumbs up, lol! |
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I loved it!! You did a really great job on this story... keep up the excellent work!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
Okay, I'm late! But I'm giving you my review anyway. 
I love it, Jen! It's a very sexy little piece. And what made it so sexy was not as much as what you wrote, but what you didn't write. Um... that sounds all wrong, but I mean it as a compliment, really! lol What I mean is you set up a wonderful, hot scene without resorting to being overly descriptive. You set it up just enough for us to, well...visualize the action but still leave just a little for us to use our imaginations too.
I just love your work, you know that? 
your loyal friend
AND loyal fan,
Pam  |
Author Feedback: *waves*
"...And what made it so sexy was not as much as what you wrote, but what you didn't write..."
Thanks! *g* I wanted to make it more about what was happening inside Hermione's head than what was happening to her physically, although let's face it, that's pretty important too. *vbeg*
Thanks for your support, matey. You know I wouldn't have delurked it if wasn't for you. *g*
Hugs
Jen |
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CryHopeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
Genevieve....
Wow... didn't you know you could write like THAT! Very hot and not overy smutty. I like the fact that you incoorperate Pumpkin Pie into the whole business. Harry smelling like pumpkin... yummy indeed.
Great one-shot, and I'm looking forward to your next chapter of The Sound of a Kiss.
Have a Happy New Year!
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Author Feedback: "...Wow... didn't you know you could write like THAT! Very hot and not overy smutty..."
Uh-oh. Busted! 
I'm so glad you liked it, and the next chapter of Sound of a Kiss will be up in the next few days - no fooling! *g* |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
Nice one, Genevieve. I like your stories. Please update "The Sound of a Kiss" soon. I really like that one.
hammergal |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I'll be updating Sound of a Kiss in the next few days - the chapter is being beta-read at the moment. Yah! |
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GK ErenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
"Some days she felt as though she was playing a role on the stage, just going through the motions of everyday life for some unseen audience."
Love that sentence, perfect!!!
When do we get to 'see' Harry's turn??? |
Author Feedback: "...When do we get to 'see' Harry's turn???..."
Uh, well, I'll really have to think about that, won't I? I'm still a bit cautious about attempting Harry's POV (newbie that I am, lol!) but I'm sure I'll get around to it.
I'm glad you enjoyed this - that sentence was one I liked too. *g* |
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Aw, Jen, this was beautiful. A wonderful scene. I love the implications of a 'normal' relationship for them. And the sweetness between them. What a nice little interlude while we wait for the brilliance of your next update to 'Sound of a Kiss.'
Thanks for sharing! It was a pleasure!  |
Author Feedback: I love the implications of a 'normal' relationship for them.
Oh, me too! I actually think that I've oversimplified things here, because I suspect that it *will* be difficult for them to settle into a normal life when all is said and done. Oooh, there's some potential angst, don't you think? |
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FionaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
Delicious piece! Mmm, I could practically smell the pumpkin pie and cinnamon from here. Keep up the fabulous work! |
Author Feedback: Delicious? Oooh, thanks! *g* |
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that's cute. i like the how normal it is, for lack of a better word. it's so relaxed and calm. update soon |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I was really aiming for that feel of "what do we do now that our lives aren't in mortal danger?" feeling, so I'm glad that worked. *g* |
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RapunzelUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
This piece was just lovely. Very very well written, nice use of vocabulary, and good job keeping them in-character. And you wrote the "smut" very tastefully, which I adore.
I absolutely love your writing. "Afterwards" was a brilliant mix of angst and passion, and "The Sound of a Kiss" was just beautiful all around. You really do NC17 extremely well, without all the disgusting, trashy verbage. You also portray the intense passion and emotional connection between Harry and Hermione perfectly.
I hope to see more of your writing very soon.
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Author Feedback: *blushes* Thank you *so* much! I'm a bit overwhelmed by your feedback, but here goes:
"...And you wrote the "smut" very tastefully, which I adore..."
Heh. Must be my long-ago convent schooling.
"...You really do NC17 extremely well, without all the disgusting, trashy verbage. You also portray the intense passion and emotional connection between Harry and Hermione perfectly...."
Thank you. I really like delving into the emotional side of passion during any NC-17 pieces - I find that I bore *myself* if I just concentrate on the 'what goes where' factor of sex scenes.
"...I hope to see more of your writing very soon..."
Well, I will be updating Sound of a Kiss in the next few days - finally!
Thanks so much for your feedback - it's put a huge smile on my face!
Cheers
Jen |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
I d o n t h a v e a r e v i e w |
Author Feedback: Aw, that's a shame. |
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I loved it! Im assuming this is the end, right? Ill just have to go read more of ur stories. Tootles1 |
Author Feedback: Yes, it was just a little on-shot. I'm so glad you liked it! |
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DaisySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
Loved it. Thanks to CC for coming up with the challenge and to you for answering the call with hot shower sex. I've read everything you've put up so far and it's all been phenomenal. Great work.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
very good details, interesting, erotic i enjoyed reading it very much |
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