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This fic is awesome hot and I loved the way you described everyhintg! thanks a lot for sharing it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/08
wonderfull story, just like everything you write. i have been a fan since stumbling upon your pb fictions. one thing lead to another, and here i find myself reading a hp fanfiction... i would have never thought it possible, but here i am. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/07
You are a really good author. I love how you describe everything with such detail(and not just the sex). I look forward to reading more of your stories. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/02/07
Who knew Harry Potter fanfiction could be so hot?!? Definitely a pairing that I would like to see more of. |
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Great story, wish there was more chapters in it but it was still GREAT one  Can't wait for more stories from you!!!!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/06
Holy shit!!!!!!!!  First of all, good gravy, woman! I thought I was a good author, but, no. YOU are a good author. It's like compairing a 3-years old's finger-painting to a da Vinci masterpiece! |
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
Another wonderful love scene. Though it came just a little bit short of expressing the emotions of H/Hr as compared to "The Sound of a Kiss" it is still a very worthy piece. I was hoping that it would've gone on a bit longer so that we could see Harry's "climax" and not just Hermiones-- his climax from her perspective (as this fic is written in) can be just as powerful, even if the reader isn't inside Harry's mind from his POV. But that's not exactly a complaint, as on its own it works well as a fic from Hermione's POV. Even being a few steps behind "Sound of a Kiss," this fic is outstanding and will serve as a good tie-me-over while I impatiently wait for the next chapter of "kiss" . . . Keep up the great work . . . |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. 
It was written for a specific challenge and I kept deliberately kept it short. It's also set in a different 'universe' to Sound of a Kiss as well, so the stories probably do have a different feel to them. (I hope so, anyway, or else I'll getting very predictable in my old age, lol!). One of these days I really will have to write a long story from Harry's POV. *g*
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lissa05Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/06
I love this story! It is perfect! Gives us a little taste of just enough, but begging for me. It's vague, but in a good way. I like it! Fantastic job! |
Author Feedback: Vague but in a good way? I'm very glad you liked it. |
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Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/05
I enjoyed this so much I feel I had to leave a comment here in addition to the one I left on your journal. This was so lovely. YOu definitely, as usual, had me in your world.
EllenM |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much, my dear! Both comments are very much appreciated. |
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Wow, great story. very intriguing and very hard to stop reading once you've started! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!
I guess it could have been longer. One of these days I really am going to have to write something from Harry's POV. *g* |
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what a useful trick that apparating is. Nice fic, very steamy |
Author Feedback: "...what a useful trick that apparating is..."
Oh yes indeedy! *smirk*
I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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I like the way you write! Welcome to my favorite author's list!! |
Author Feedback: "...Welcome to my favorite author's list!! >>>"
*blushes*
Thank you! |
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oooh i simply love the way u write that was a great story |
Author Feedback: *grins* Thanks! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/01/05
oohh god do i wish i was her harry is soo sexy!! |
Author Feedback: "...do i wish i was her..."
I have to say it...me too! |
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