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AWWWWW! That was sp sweet! I loved it! I love James and Lily fluff fics/ i love the whole Lily/James ship. xD That was awesome! |
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liked it. not bad, VERY sappy, but cool. you are a good writer. |
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awww i love it this was the best please write more lily and james fics  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/03/05
Im sorry. but I have to tell you this very sad sad news.... it only rockethed the world...Im sorry.  It was played as my parents first dance. love the song! |
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Yay Yay Yay! I just love songs in fics! Well done- Well chosen song! I've one in the works with Lily singing! This was brill; L/J fics never get the reviews they deserve! Cheers- IamHermione |
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KaraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
WOW!! I really liked this one, it doesn't seem like this is your first fic (i thik you said it's your first, i can't remember!) Now, i have to go watch Moulin Rouge (sp?), as you have inspired me to do so with this song! |
Author Feedback: thank you...and no it's like...my 15th or 16th fic..just the first Lily/James one! haha...and I LOVE moulin rouge...i just got the soundtrack for xmas...and at first i was going to have them not dating and then james just gets up on the table during dinner or something and sings it to her...im such a sap...anyways...thanks again for your review!!!
sarah  |
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aaww! This was ssssssssooooooooooo sweet! I loved it! Perfect, perfect PERFECT! The best part was that this COULD be real! aawww! I just cant get over it! keep writting and updating at Portkey! ~Kelsey~ |
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very cute!, I wish i could have actually heard and saw James singing that song. Next time use a bit more discriptive stuff but for your first time, you did great. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
that was so stupid!!!! YOU cant get married in seventh year at hogwarts!! And if you read the books you would know Lily doesnt really like James all that much !!!! GREAT TRY!!! |
Author Feedback: hate to disappoint you, but they never did get married did they? he just proposed and she accepted...oh - and if YOU would have read the books, they started dating in seventh year! NICE TRY! |
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Aww, James is such a thoughtful bloke. Anyway, it was an extremely sweet fic and an extremely sweet idea. |
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katieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
Oh My God!!!
It was beatiful.  I can't believe how you caught Lilly's emotions like that. I didn't know that james was that much of a sweetie Lilly's soooo lucky now that I think about it. How do you write so well? Um, sorry, but I gtg.
 Bye
You're an amazing writer
~Katie |
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Aquarius21Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
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THAT WAS SO AWESOMELY SWEET!!! Very very well written. Good going. 