Same old story, often times rehashed with minor alterations, but this one I should say, stands out from the rest.  Maybe because it was perfectly written?  I guess because the story was personal - coming from experience - inner feelings put into writing, like Hermione's journal - which made this more wonderful and unique.
Lovely description of their post-Hogwarts life, I wish that's how it's going to end in the books - with them all alive.
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Author Feedback: Yes, I realized that it was the same-old story when I started writing it. I think that's why I DID write it, because it was based on personal experience and I was thinking, "Wow...my life... a fanfic?". It was quite amusing for me. ;D
But thank you so much for the compliments. It's always good for an author to hear that they brought something of their own and new to something that's been pretty much beaten into the ground. And perfectly written? Nah.
And I thought that the journal was something that was in her character in her to do. I can just see her getting incredably fusterated and scribbling furiously all over it.
And thank you! I always thought that Hermione would make an excellent Healer. I do hope that they all make it out alive. It would be a most lovely ending.
Thanks so much for your comments! You made my day. ^.^
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I hereby bow down to the Queen of One-shots. I am at your service, my liege. |
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PL_DraftSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
Wow. Really, really, really liked this fic. And there's nothing wrong with fluffy one-shots! You landed this one perfectly. It kept me enthralled, not making me think, "Okay, why am I reading this?" Fabulous. |
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2buxSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
that was a really great story. so much anguish and pain. unrequited love is the best and worst thing that happens to people. you did a great job describing it. thanks. |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
Absolutely brilliant. I was really worried there for a while that it would be a really sad piece to read. But I was pleasantly surprised. The angst was almost palpable. How did Harry realise that Courtney wasn't Hermione? What about the missing journal? Will we get another perspective? Perhaps Harry's or Ron's?
Thanks for the story. |
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Haha. Your iPod awoke your muse? I must buy one of those! ^_^ Anyway, very well done, with a bit of good humor at the end, and great descriptions. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the compliments! Yes, and iPod is a wonderful thing for your muse...ver very great indeed. ;D |
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Wow! This story rocked. I am so sorry that you had a situation similar to this, and I know you said you didn't necessarily want sympathetic reviews, but your experiences gave us a wonderful story with a (thankfully!) happy ending. Great job, and I hope you plan on writing more on this one!
Thanks, Shayna |
Author Feedback: Actually, it's only a one-shot and, most likely, won't be touched upon any more.
And thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^.^ |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
kl got me goin hope he would relise before dat she wasn't hermione oh well i tink it's a romantic story fanxs for righting it |
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Hey great job on this little bit of angsty fluff. Great work with hermione's diary entries and her thoughts and feelings. I treally think you have everyone spot on and have a great view for how JKR would continue things out of hogwarts realistically. Keep up the great work! |
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What a wonderful story!!  Sigh...I always hate to start reading stories where they're with someone else, but I know they will always end up together in the end. As it should be.  And Ron's reactions were great! I couldn't help but laugh! Excellent and very well written. Thanks for sharing!! |
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IzabelSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
I really like the way you wrote your fic! It was really good and I enjoyed it! Congratulations and Happy New Year  |
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This bloody fantastic! Oh my god! Wow. I love that kind of story. It, to use a cliché, heartwarming.
Your little a/n at the end was intruiging- I hope you get it sorted out.
Well done, again! Fair dues! IamHermione |
Author Feedback: Haha! Thanks bunches. It really isn't much. ;D
And thanks, hope I get it sorted out too. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
Good story! Love the way you wrote Harry and Hermione, it was intense, their connection. I think JKR writes them that way...they have a bond like no other. There's no way they could love anyone else like they love each other. The doorway scene was perfect. Great job!
hammergal |
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KirstiRSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
“Courtney wasn't Hermione,” He said simply, nodding as if he were agreeing on something.
Ron paused, as if waiting for the punch line. “Uh-huh…” he said slowly. He looked at Harry as if waiting for something more. I wished he would hurry it up already. “That's it?” he asked.
Brilliant! Even though I would have liked to know what happened with Harry and Courtney when he realised, you handled the entire scene very well! Great job, and I will look forward to more stories from you. |
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Thank you for this story.That was great keep up the great work and enjoy your self.Please ignore any and all flames and have fun when you write.
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