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acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 13/04/06
huh? JEEZ! ok, so i decided to read these chapters anyway - dumbledore is confusing right now. like way. so i'm, uh, trying to understand what is going through your mind when you're writing this. j/k. i would like you to update though. that would be SWEET! as in like awesome like banana split with all the awesome goodness on top with* a cherry, duh. come on, finish the fic! finish it!!!!
melissa
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acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 12/04/06
are you going to continue with this fic? i just read the first chapter and it was awesome - BUT i don't want to read anymore if you're not going to FINISH. so i'm wondering....are you still working on this? i mean no malice - i just don't want to find myself high and dry wilst getting all excited about a good read and then left at a dead end. its NO FUN. its happened too many times already.
thanks!
melissa
acoustics1220
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Melissa
Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 02/01/06
This is a very good fic. Very good chapter. Write more soon.
 

randomperson7
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/06
this story is amazing i read the fiction over and over again. I really like all your storys hope you update soon
 

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Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/12/05
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Author Feedback: lol - thanks

<3 MK
 

atlantis-rob
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/12/05
Good chapter once again, though I feel harry''s frustration with dumbles quit keenly at this point. And I feel bad for hermione for harry's pushing her away partially though I am sure she does understand somewhat. If you post more let me know. I don't read much here anymore and rarely login due to the on and off PK points issues.
Author Feedback: Of course I'll be glad to. I'm just glad peopel actually came back to read more Thanks so much.

<3 MK
 

Mike
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/12/05
I am so glad that you updated. I am really curious to see where this goes. I feel bad that Harry seems to be shutting everyone out. Great job!
Author Feedback: Thanks for coming back to read some more!

<3 MK
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/12/05
That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
 

pottergirlajg
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/12/05
Yay! I'm so happy that you updated! I love this story! I've been waiting for a long time! Hurry and update again ASAP please!

Author Feedback: Hooray. People don't hate me. Sorry it's been so long and thanks for taking me back

<3 MK
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/05
would you write another chapter; whats the matter with you. HURRY UP!!!
Author Feedback: Hey, I updated so... uh, you're welcome.

<3 MK
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/05
would you write another chapter; whats the matter with you. HURRY UP!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 21/09/05
I love your story, but you have to update. I am getting very agravated. You did so well at the beginnig, updating quite frequently, so please try to add another chapter.
Author Feedback: Hey, I'm sorry it's been soo long but I've had to concentrate on school and things have been piling up. I hope you decide to be one of my readers again because I'll have more time now that Christmas break is coming up.

<3 MK
 

Zapata666
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 24/04/05
I'm really enjoying reading this fic. The chapters are a tad on the short side, but that doesn't really matter. I really felt for Harry, guilt is a terrible feeling. Incidently, where it says:

"Neither of them felt the need to tell her that it was summer and there was no way they'd catch ammonia."

Shouldn't it be pneumonia instead of ammonia?
Author Feedback: In case you didn't get a notice I've updated and I'd really appreciate you coming back to read more. I'm well aware I haven't really been updating but I have more time now. Thanks.

<3 MK
 

atlantis-rob
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 24/01/05
Great work on this chapter, especially harry's continuing guilt. Getting over what happened for both teens won't be easy at all. Trust and all that associated crap. Great work with hermione's working with him and interesting twist with what dumbledore said. Almost an admission of his own guilt in everything. Kudos! Keep up the awesome work!
Author Feedback: I've finally updated this fic so I'd really appreciate you coming back to read more. It would mean a lot to know that I still have some fans after so long. Thanks for your time.

<3 MK
 

HHR4ever
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/01/05
oh! another excellent chapter...i'm seriously in love with this story! ok well..hermione is going to try something to make harry feel more comfortable around her again, maybe? will voldermort try anything like possesing harry again? oh i guess i'm just gonna have to read to find out...i HATE cliffhangers...this chapter didn't have one, or too big of one, though. well i let you go back to your writing...please update soon!

faithful reader,
golden roses
Author Feedback: Hey! I've finally updated. I hope you come to read my new chapter and I think I'll be updating quite frequently now becuase I'll have more time now that I'm caught up and break is here

<3 MK
 

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