Well, a nice refreshing twist from the normal James and Lily fics I've come across. One thing that bothers me is that Lily comes across as being kind of prude and stuck up. (Like Lavender Brown or something.) Looking at the story from James' point of view, I see a woman with a loud and insulting attitude and seems to have a entrealiophac disorder (Unable to settle down) and not to mention, sleeps around.

James' comes across as your stereotypical keeper guy and Lily as a stereotypical irish hore. I don't really see the basis for his motivation...

Well, this is quite a bit different from your other fics (And not necessarily in a good way). I fail to understand how James is so hung up on Lily, it must be her looks, because her personality is shit.

Nice story ! I loved the supermen part !!! and also the part that with that guy that had 3 children in the age of 29 !
Its great to read about a differend Lily and not about the good little lily !

Thank god it's not a one-shot. I'm enjoying reading this way too much. I love Lily James, and even though you KNOW they end up together you never know what 2 expect.

I definetely agree on you writing a prequel. You did a really good job.


from a big fan,

Gaby Urias

must be boring being a painting... honestly, i could never hint to anything like that around any of my professors!

i'm up for a prequel OR a sequel, take your pick! ... knowing my luck, though, if you have one i probably looked over it and didn't realize it. ergh (so, if lily's already married, what exactly did she need the dress for? lol, just KIDDING!) (note: lily was always talking about being a desk receptionist, even to james... i was wondering what the heck she meant when she was thinking "liar" because she'd mentioned it earlier! glad to have THAT cleared up)
i LOVED reading this - lily was so hilarious! at least she went to the gym when she was peeved instead of committing random manslaughter or something (it wouldn't be random after a while, though - that and people would know to stay out of her way!) the bartender, joe, made me laugh because he though emmy and lily were absolutely bonkers, going on about galleons and a snitch and such.

he -dumbledore- called lily over to join his POKER GROUP? and i know that dumbledore's open and all, but he actually *said* something about "finding them on his desk" or whatever
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dumbledore's like a freakin hippie, it's GREAT! ROTFL "not that i'm all for love and all that good stuff" (i think you were missing "not that i'm not" but whatever) dumbledore had me ROLLING
i'm SO glad that lily said yes to james!

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i'd be about willing to bet money that dumbledore was eavesdropping the entire time

he didn't go through with it? yes freakin YES! *does a little dance in the computer chair*
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james fighting voldemort? what the heck? JAMES fighting VOLDEMORT? oo, this is about to get interesting (hey, whatever happened to the evil woman herself? hopefully she screamed so loud that a window in the church broke -in my dreams, i know, but still!- and that you don't have her pop back up)

will somebody please stop the wedding madness that's about to ensue? ESPECIALLY seeing as nobody can stand erica or whatever her name is, except for the evil tramp herself. whoo, things are about to heat up in the CHURCH! lol

holy crud, PLEASE tell me that she's not going to be gone in the morning! "there's always the morning" my BEHIND! ... i guess i'll have to read the next chapter to find out, lol

ah, the joys of being such an impossible female. i understand it perfectly

How many more reviews for a prequel!? great story i loved it.. so much that i am in fact not doing my intense BIO homework that needs to be done which will probably cause me to fail BIO which I will blame on you and punish you by reaading more of your stories.. Poop on you!
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KaCi

That was so good It really kept me entertained for a good hour or so. It was a really good plot and all that. One thing about reading fics all at once, you don't get so angsty, cuz the next chapters always a click away! *laughs* So, on to read the rest of your collected works.

reeli gr8!! ill look to c if you have a prequel written but if not yes it sounds a gr8 idea!!!