You know, I actually printed this out and read it over on the train into the city I liked it so much.

That's such a really sweet story! Usually I don't like Christmas stories, but I really liked this one! You writing was really great! Awesome job!

wow, nicely writen, and from quite an unusual writing viewpoint too

not to bad i only wish that it was just alittle longer

The perspective of the story gave it really different feel. It was a really sweet story, especially Harry's nervousness.

WOW! VERY WELL WRITTEN! I LOVE IT! ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THIS STORY? I HOPE SO!

This was actually quite good. The title didn't do it justice, I thought.

But the dynamics between Harry and Hermione were perfect, very in-character. I'm glad you didn't make it all perfect and surreal, like, "Will you marry me, Hermione?" "Yes! Ohmigod, I love you sooooo much!" How annoying would that have been? Anyway. self-conscience!Harry is very nice. Very like him.

The use of second-person narration is a bit odd, and not commonly used. But it worked VERY well here, it made it more interesting to read. Gave the reader a more personal insight into Harry's thoughts, like I'm the one telling the story, and not an uninterested observer. I really liked the second-person here. It's really hard to work with, but you did it well.

Few grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too obvious.

"Do I have to put it on myself, Potter?" Cute line.

....That's all. It was short, and sweet. Keep it up. I've read some of your other pieces, and I think this is my favorite so far.

Thanks.

I really liked it. Great use of imagery.

The one thing that bothered me, and I only noticed it in the beginning is you mixed your tenses and that's something you need to watch out for.

I'll just start off this review with the little guy with the hearts popping over his head. How totally sweet was that!! Oh, there he is again!! Very nice. And may they live happily ever after (Merlin knows Harry deserves it!) Great story!! Thanks for sharing it with us! Happy Holidays!

I love this! It's so sweet and warmed my heart *sigh* I love the playful dialogue between Harry and Hermione especially, and the engagement was great

I love, LOVE this..it's so fluffy but..it touches your heart, you know? Definitely faving it..

Thanks for writing this! Although..why is it called "A Christmas to Remember"?