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Of Gift Giving and Foggy Glasses

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q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
I don't know why but i had the feeling that this was written in Ron's ghost POV and i like it.
Well, i'm quite sure that this is not the way you write that as i really think that if it was in Ron's POV it would have some joke or funny comments.
Bye
 

myrhlyn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Aww! This was so cute! It definitely warmed my heart, even though it's nowhere near Christmas.
 

harryherm84
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/05
Very cute story! I loved how he proposed, so cute! Great work!
 

ilovemagic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/05
Cute story, but I didn't like the voice you used, or whatever you would call it. I kept wondering who was telling Harry about himself and why.
 

Hermionepotter112161
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/05
That was really cute I really enjoyed reading this story (it would be nice if there was a sequal.)Please!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Green_Eye_Sparkle16
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/05
That was a wonderful story! It was perfect! I love the way you wrote it...I don't come across a lot like that! Please continue to write more! Excellent Job!
 

Abby
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/05
I really liked this fic a lot! I love post-hogwarts fics like this and this one was so great! I love how you had them go into the book shop. I also love the way you have them all lovey-dovey to each other! I very much enjoyed this fiction! Thank you for your wonderful work!
 

~Emma_Granger~
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/05
Perhaps I say this too often, but a good romantic story leaves a person without anything much to say. I have no criticizism, and it was well written. I don't think there's anything else to say.
 

lognar1525
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
*dreamy smile* what a wonderful stroy Kalie. I don't know how you do it, but you capture the atmosphere and make the story so intense... it's marvelous.
 

Amdorn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
So sweet. Great story. Loved Hermione. She is so strong in this story. Very secure in who she is. It was a little difficult getting into the style of writing with Harry refering to himself in third person, I think you is third person. But once I got past that it was a fun read.

Thanks
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
This was awesome! I loved the Harry's POV in the second person.
 

Jenna Kathleen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
I loved this story. It was something that almost brought me to tears when I read aout him proposing that way...It indeed was a happy Christmas..

Happy New Year to you as well!
 

tracie1976
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
That was wonderful. It was so sweet. I loved how nervous Harry was.
 

Azure
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
Good job. *clap*

Very well-written, of course, and the banter between the two was very much in-character. I actually have to disagree with a previous reader on the use of second person - in this case, to be honest, I'm of the mind that the story would have been just as effective from the third. *shrug* Certainly, a second person story is rare and rather unique, but the story is excellent enough to not necessarily need or benefit from the extra touch, so while second person didn't necessarily detract from the content, I can't help but think the thing may have been better off with 'plain old' Harry said, Hermione said, et cetera. : )

Just an opinion, of course. Regardless, you have my kudos for an excellent tale.
 

Shayna4H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/04
Now that was what I call a great Christmas romance! We all need some of them once in a while, and I do love Christmas, because more stories like THESE show up! Great job, and I think it would be exciting if you did a sequel or an epilogue to this story.

Thanks, Shayna
 

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