q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
I don't know why but i had the feeling that this was written in Ron's ghost POV and i like it.
Well, i'm quite sure that this is not the way you write that as i really think that if it was in Ron's POV it would have some joke or funny comments.
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myrhlynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Aww! This was so cute! It definitely warmed my heart, even though it's nowhere near Christmas.  |
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Very cute story! I loved how he proposed, so cute! Great work! |
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Cute story, but I didn't like the voice you used, or whatever you would call it. I kept wondering who was telling Harry about himself and why. |
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That was a wonderful story! It was perfect! I love the way you wrote it...I don't come across a lot like that! Please continue to write more! Excellent Job! |
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AbbyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/05
I really liked this fic a lot! I love post-hogwarts fics like this and this one was so great! I love how you had them go into the book shop. I also love the way you have them all lovey-dovey to each other! I very much enjoyed this fiction! Thank you for your wonderful work! |
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Perhaps I say this too often, but a good romantic story leaves a person without anything much to say. I have no criticizism, and it was well written. I don't think there's anything else to say. |
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*dreamy smile* what a wonderful stroy Kalie. I don't know how you do it, but you capture the atmosphere and make the story so intense... it's marvelous. |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
So sweet. Great story. Loved Hermione. She is so strong in this story. Very secure in who she is. It was a little difficult getting into the style of writing with Harry refering to himself in third person, I think you is third person. But once I got past that it was a fun read.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
This was awesome! I loved the Harry's POV in the second person. |
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I loved this story. It was something that almost brought me to tears when I read aout him proposing that way...It indeed was a happy Christmas..
Happy New Year to you as well! |
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That was wonderful. It was so sweet. I loved how nervous Harry was. |
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AzureSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
Good job. *clap*
Very well-written, of course, and the banter between the two was very much in-character. I actually have to disagree with a previous reader on the use of second person - in this case, to be honest, I'm of the mind that the story would have been just as effective from the third. *shrug* Certainly, a second person story is rare and rather unique, but the story is excellent enough to not necessarily need or benefit from the extra touch, so while second person didn't necessarily detract from the content, I can't help but think the thing may have been better off with 'plain old' Harry said, Hermione said, et cetera. : )
Just an opinion, of course. Regardless, you have my kudos for an excellent tale. |
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Now that was what I call a great Christmas romance! We all need some of them once in a while, and I do love Christmas, because more stories like THESE show up!  Great job, and I think it would be exciting if you did a sequel or an epilogue to this story.
Thanks, Shayna |
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