poor harry - thank god he had hermione to fall back on, this was well written and very emotive

That was so heartbreakingly good. I can't wait to read some of your other works. Thank you.

Oh...my...god. That was a beautiful piece of work. You probably get this a lot...but wow. Just wow. You have such an eloquent way with words and you describe feelings so beautifully. You are an AMAZING writer! Keep up the wonderful work!

God, how I love it...
*sighs*
Well, I should, it's sort of 'mine' after all

I love it for being so canon and simple and intensive at the same time. I think these two lines: "Sometimes she feels those invisible ribbons winding together into knots" and "He looks at her as if she’s the one person who could bring him out of this self-imposed prison he’s being held captive in" are the very essence of this piece - and of their relationship.

You know, it left me teary-eyed when i read it for the first time, it's so heart-wrenching. But now, knowing what you actually CAN write I'd say that reading this I can - how tu put it? - savor the relative 'normalcy' of their situation... See what you've done to me?

One thing - maybe you should state it clearly in A/N that it's a missing OotP scene? You know, just to avoid some nonsensical reviews...

And I love you too, Chrissy. You know I do.

it was really good but too short. wat yr were thy in? did something happen between harry and hermione? you are a #$@!*&^ amateaur

Wow! That was a very moving piece of work for being so short, you really hit a mark there or something. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing!

Amazing... your writing is so heart-felt and touching; this fic nearly had me in tears. I absolutely loved it!

Very very touching story. I like it very much. Good job!

*Turns sarcasm switch off*

Another lovely piece. I hadn't considered this as a missing scene, but it works really well within the framework of OotP. Nothing overt, but further develops the bond between them.

*turns sarcasm switch back on*
Now, you've gone and kicked out two one shots in a row and I don't see another Magnolias chapter out? I can only assume that these were Christmas gifts? At this rate, I am going to have to reread the previous chapter all over again! Need I remind that I've already done this once! Your killing me here, your really killing me.

*turns sarcasm switch off*
I channeled the Grinch for a moment there. Sorry about that. As always we appreciate you sharing your wonderful work with us. And, as I've already wished you a Merry Christmas, I offer you a Happy New Year this time around. Cheers!

P.S. I just reread my review. God, I'm obnoxious. You should just delete this. Cheers!

Thank you for this chapter and story.Please keep up the great work and enjoy your self when you write.Ignore any and all flames.

I like how you've written Harry here and I love how Hermione can sense him, even with the invisibility cloak. Just a wonderful piece!

Isn't Justyna just fab? She inspires/requests the best stuff.

Hmm - so that would explain why I woke up to so many chapter alerts in my inbox this morning...

So - what to say that I haven't already said (sorry if I'm repeating here). I'm a big fan of the 'missing scene' fics, if only because they force the author to remain as canon as possible with the situations and characters - and we all know how difficult that can sometimes be.

But I can see Hermione working through her pain, forcing herself to get up and look for him, all on her gut instinct that he's there and hiding from her. How ridiculous if he hadn't been - but there's that connection - that beautiful palpable thing between them....

You're so good at that!

This is a great story. I can really see this being placed at the end of OOTP. Nicely done!