I love this story, but GET BACK TO THE HARRY AND HERMIONE PARTS!

I\'m so happy you did not quit on this story! I have been peeking to see if there's been activity on a regular basis! Can't wait to see what happens next...guess I'll click and find out!

i've just discovered your story and have spent the last 2 days reading it all. I just wanted to let you know how very much i've enjoyed and that I hope you're still writing. I hope it remains a story with a happy ending, but even if the couples are star crossed after all, I would still love to follow it to the end. best of luck to you, and I hope you can update soon.
thank you!! Sara R.

Hey...

Coming down from a high since the last two chapters you also smack the reader right in the face with a nucleartipped hand....i felt completely reverse from the other two chapters, no smile on my face when reading this chapter but an angry face instead. Jeeez how sick is this!! brrrrrr.

That was very graphic even without any details!! and thank god for no details, i sincerely hope that will never come!.

Poor girl....like she said, it was supposed to be completely different the first time and i wonder how fucked up in the head she will be later on if she indeed survive

Well moving on to the Ginny-Draco thing, i find it a bit surprising how fast Hermione accept that she is seeing Draco, i know we the reader see that she suspects something before this chapter but still...unless of course we get to see them interact later on, could be that she will react otherwise. Ron on the other hand i am almost 100% sure that you dont let him accept it so fast as Hermione, i know your Ron is more laid back than the canon Ron but still....hope to see some funny situations or perhaps a fight or two hehe.

Will go to bed now and get that start out of my mind, i hope they get their sweet revenge at some point!!!!!.

Goodnight.

Aaaah what a start....i want to be Harry! (but with an elder Hermione for sure), to wake up to such a vision....it's been a little while since i tried that (gotta get into the dating scene again soon).

That was some outburst from Harry, but i wonder how Hermione is capable to tell Harry about voldie possesing her since she could not tell Dumbledore even??!?. Perhaps because of love?, just wondering...

Hehehe....funny enough, consider this..first Hermione is scandalized and blushing so much that she could disappear infront of a red wall...right?, and then Harry and Hermione does the horisontal mambo and suddenly she is a minx!? , had you planned that or was that the minx part of you that finally was allowed out?

Now for the part where you are responsible for me having to wipe the monitor clean from my coffee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, yes...you know PERFECTLY well what situation i mean!, the "them busting in and surprising Harry and Hermione situation!". I mean going from a perfectly serene wakeup in the morning and then the action starts immedially with Seamus . Damn i was laughing good there, thanks for that one. And thank god that Ron took it well, the part where they hug and thank him was a bit akward after all that nudeness i thought, yes you write she was clever enough to secure that sheat but it was still a little weird to read, like they were a whole big family or something

2 hours.....hehe well the concept of time disappears when in love i guess

There it is again....you pesky girls are some serious chatterbugs when it comes to sheatgymnastics eh?...i want details blah blah blah

Well i thought it was a great chapter to come after that focal point from the last chapter, a great way to easy the tension and emotional high form reading about passion, even if it DID continue in this one also hehe.

So once again i thank you for good entertaining, exept me having to clean my computer!

So see you tomorrow, and btw. i am very pleased to hear about you working on this fic again , i like to think that my reviewing your story had something to do with it but all credit goes to your muse and imagination .

I wish you good luck with writing on, and hope your brain is up to it , hehe a little jab from the coffee incident again (funny how i cannot seem to let that slip eh? )

Goodnight from Denmark

#¤&%#¤"#&!¤#!##&%#&"#%¤#"&/%¤/%&&¤#%"##¤!"%!"#%#"¤ justin!!!! . Hehe....so you used the good old disturbance feint to make the reader go nuts....well it worked....you ¤#%"#!

HRRMFF!.

Holy crap....the heat from your own face must have melted some of the monitor when you wrote that ending! ,that was VERY well written, and yes i suppose what every girl wants their first time to be (most boys dont even think about it like that unfortunately , we just want to have SEX!...hehe sorry....a little rant from me again .

I like it, i like the fact that what she says about that she had it all planned out about them graduating, and getting on with life sounds just like the Hermione we all love and care about.

But at the same time me the reader has to say the usual words said when reading great fics here on portkey, and those are "FINALLY!", i bet you feel the same when reading other stories that you feel for and love to read, right?

Now that was how you write love, the part about Ron and his thoughts when playing goalie...that was very good, that was how it is and for sure that was what made him hold the goal free....very good!!.

I want to ask if that is how you imagined it will be for you buuuuuuuuuuuut that might be too personal so lets just skip that .

So finally together and i have no doubt that us readers will get more passionate situations later on so on that note....

Reading on!.

Hehe.....nosy Ginny...i don't really know how she is since i haven't read the last two books of the series, so i cannot tell if your characterization of her is spot on or way off .

I imagine you don't find it hard to write about such conversations with Hermione and Ginny since i ention i gather you yourself are very used to them....right?

I have always wanted to be a fly on the wall when my former girlfriends had their "girl's night only" just to know what they were talking about, but i imagine this is pretty spot on hehe...I even disturbed them once by accident because i forgot about the night....imagine me...standing in the middle of a livingroom, it's totally silent and i am fidgeting severely with my hands and my eyes are scanning every escaperoute and then one of her friends say "he's not so hot to me.." GRRRRRRRR....i'll show you hot you little ¤"#%!"#¤" , the only thing that saved that girl from being scalped alive was my girlfriend that took me out of the livingroom in a hurry . tsk tsk... a fly on the wall: yes, in the middle of it: NO SPANK YOU VERY MUCH!.

I am a sucker for flushing people, i love it when i am able to make girlfriends flush embarrased or for better reasons hehehe.....so i love to read about it also and i find your Hermione to be juuuust the girl i like, scandalised and embarrased in certain situations, and i was actually smiling big when i read that you yourself flushed when writing about....serious makeout sessions, but i have the feeling that i have better things to read later on, if so i want to know how you got it written without burning a hole in the floor

Well, another chapter read with smiles, chuckles, grins, sighs and enjoyment .

Jumping on!.

Shake the sphere?, shakinfear?, snakemeeeeow?....i believe he is spelled Shakespeare ( im a controlfreak and i HATE not knowing things so i have checked it out ;D ).

First off..... *ROFL*! that was a GREAT way of letting us all know that they have grown in your story, simply by having a HEAP of trouble all fitting under the cloak HAHA i was really seeing that before my eyes when i read that particular part , great stuff!.

What on earth was those two outbursts that attacked Hermione in the shower?, was that just a little punch from Voldie?....

I like they way you make the characters interact, like the end where Harry and Hermione are alone, that was intimate and me the reader almost felt like intruding when reading the part...and thus creating a paradox since it WAS for the reader to read .

Yes i had planned reviewing each chapter as a read them, but if that's too much then i could just review the last one...

But to be totally honest i am reviewing each chapter in the hope that i can kickstart your writing again for this story

Really good chapter, i liked the way you made Dean the center figure in the beginning and letting him hate Herbology, that gave emotional depth to a character that even JKR haven't done to my knowlegde, she of course was writing about Harry and only his thoughts and feelings, at least that's what i know from the 5 books in the series i have read.

"give me my sin again" his eyes spoke to her......you do have a great gift of really nailing the atmosphere and thoughts with words...that was the one sentense that stood out in this chapter, well written, well delivered and to be remembered.

Maybe i should use that one as a pickup line just before i have to duck against the almost certain slap coming my way .

She is loosening up, that's a good thing since all this keeping apart and denying her feelings is just waste of time!, get on with it goddamn it! , i have a feeling that she will break soon and then we get to read about some serious makeout sessions hehe

I actually find it soothing not to read about those girls since i can concentrate on the main characters and their antics

But i guess my hopes of another chapter free from the girls are going to be shot down, trampled upon, lit on fire, burned to ashes, cast into a shell....and fired from a cannon out over the shores of Dover.....

See you tomorrow when i read the next chapter!.

Bye and goodnight

Hehe....i dont know about you, but i am not such a quidditch fan as some people are....i have read stories where whole chapters were used for describing one goddamn quidditch match!!....how boring is that?.....

So having read this one i found it to be a pleasurable length and with a, should i say, usual twist at the end....hehe...Harry always knows where he ends up.

Hehehe....Ron and his ideas, i must admit that i found it unbelievable that he and his lovemaking companions planned that little row Ron and Hermione had.....but ok...i'll let it slide...you do remember he has the emotional range of a teaspoon, although i do think your characterization of him particular is more of a laidback dude who just brezes over everything...

Oh, by the way....cool dream at the beginning

Hello again....

I know that you in this chapter cover several things, but the one thing that stands out to me is the treatment of those little girls..

I don't know how you can write such chapters and scenes with the spirit you do, that is amazing to me, since i would perhaps write one little scene of that and then i would use the next 200 chapters to write how the evil beings are themselves tortured (yes i know, a civilized person should not say or perhaps be inclined to act in such a way, but rest assured, i am in good contact with my reptile brain-functions, so to speak ).

I do believe that all those chapters you have planned, and you sure say in your reply that you are sorry about the abuse....yeah ok...now i KNOW that more brutal things are to come...and are not looking forward to read about it...AND ON TOP OF THAT YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED THE STORY!!!!, how can i read about what they are going through if i cannot have closure, if i cannot read about how they get their welldeserved revenge (well some of them, i tell you this, when i read that sentence voldie spoke about goodbyes....holy shit my hairs on my arms were truly standing up and i had goosebumbs down my back, that was a really perfectly delivered jab of evil!!).

Sorry for not reviewing about the other scenes in this chapter but this really gets to me such things.....brrr!.

Hehe, i would also be looking for an escape if several of my friends were trying to improve my lovelife by giving me suggestions....but giving that i am quite a bit older than Harry it would be even more embarrasing for me ;D.

So he finally let Hermione into who he is. Your characterization of Voldie is actually quite good, and knowing that he uses those little children to do his magic just makes him so much more disgusting and revolting to read.

I sincerely hope that you don't let anything like what is happening to those young girls, happen to Hermione, she is my favorite character of all the potterverse characters ....just a warning, i will be very direct in my views in the reviews if you hurt her in any way

This is actually fun to read since most of the time it is the male part of the partnership that are in denial or oblivious to the others infatuation hehe...

It's late now and i will read the next chapter tomorrow after work....goodnight from denmark .

Hello again Miss Brown .

Sorry for the lack of "HERE I AM!", but real life can be a hellhole and a blessing at the same time..brr....don't let me start on my rantiSTOP IT!!...

But here i am again and fresh from IRL to read on to imagine and to fantasize .
This chapter shows some REAL character and atmosphere right from the beginning, and i want to number the things i noticed and what emotion i felt reading it.

1. Ron's feelings about Hermione and Harry together, i've been in situations where jealousy was almost taking over my actions, so your description of his feelings hit a nerve in me and i must admit that his rant inside his head about doing no good would not have affected me in the same way, so that particular part of the chapter really riled me up, but in a good way since i could relate to him!.

2. The way you introduced the mythic spell of Somnium Gradior, i must admit that i have no idea as to what it could mean, it looks like someone just burbed something in latin to me - But to have the explanation of the effects told by Hermione and at the same time introduce us to the fact that the necklace (and/or ring) has something to do with it....hehe well done , i first thought that the voice in her head was her mother from "the other side"....but clearly i was wrong

3. The part about the abducted children....i have a bad feeling that the description of their hell in this chapter is not as detailed as it is going to be in other chapters...and for me this part is already disturbing, you do it well you know?...stirring feelings of hate and revenge in your readers from your descriptions of torture and (i imagine for females) what could be worse.... , i would actually bet that you have that particular thing prepared for future chapters since that would surely make for some loathing and severe curses from the readers part, well i would.

Those scenes are those i hate and, well almost fear to read since i react very strongly.

Yes...i KNOW its a story and i KNOW it is part of it, but still.... you do get attached to your characters even those who are not known outside this story and then i guess you want nothing more than to go in, guns blazing and bullets flying

This was a really good chapter that got my emotions worked up, so good job! .

Will be reading on.

GReat story so far! Some of the best lines I have read from any fanfiction yet. I have been reading fanfiction for over four years now so that is saying something if you are still wanting help with someone to bounce ideas off of look me up on msn or e-mail me at Tlg200234@hotmail.com. I really hope you don't abandon this story it is very good, one of the most suspenseful stories I have read. Keep the chapters coming! Sorry that you are in a rut with chapter 21. Ok well I am off to read more fanficition!

That was a great beginning, and scary!. I cannot imagine the feeling of loss and despair one feels when loosing someone very close to you (haven't had that happen to me yet). Your way of describing Hermiones feelings and actions really shows the reader how much one's world come crashing down in an instant (felt like holding her and comforting her).

I had to adjust a bit since you jumped somewhat around in the first and then this chapter (i know you "warned" us about it but still had to shift gear at one point ).

Of course he will be saying that it meant nothing and that he felt nothing.....felt like beating some sense into him when reading that , good thing that Hermione knew he was lying.

So no.....HAHAHAHA, just tuned into one of the tv channel here in denmark and there they are showing Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.....what a coincidence

Well so now i will be reading on