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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 12/08/08
I really like this story line and totally interested to see the ending (but not too quickly
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/05/08
Please please please finish this story. It is still the best one on this site.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 02/03/08
I just discovered your story today (from Mugglenet with url to come here.) Well done! I am up wayyyy past my bedtime so that I could finish reading. I'm really enjoying it; you have a wonderful talent. Hope to see more soon.
Dianna

 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 27/02/08
i've been reading you story since it started three/four years ago! i just love your story so much! i hope you can update real soon! its been a while
 

Kandy123
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 13/01/08
so they all think shes working for you-know-who?wow thats surprising and the girls seem to be getting on better even though they are locket away.update soon
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 26/12/07
Great work on the story so far. The plot is intriguing, and I'm so glad that you decided to change it from being about star crossed lovers. I absolutely love the bantering between all the characters, and I hope you write more of that. Draco and Ginny's last scene was very emotional--though I would have liked to read the argument Ginny had with Ron. I would also like to see a little bit more of Ron and Luna's interaction, if it fits into your story. So, other than that, I have a feeling (it may not be right) that eran lot doesn't exist, and I wonder what Wormtail will decide to do, if anything...
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 07/12/07
I liked the first part from Dean's perspective and him listening to Harry and Hermione's conversation/argument. The part with Harry busting him was good Good chapter
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 05/12/07
Favorite line: “Hang on. Do you mean to tell me,” Harry said slowly. “that you've been talking to Seamus and Dean, behind my back, about my love life?” “Actually it wasn't really behind your back. We mostly talked while you were sleeping. Was loads easier that way.”

I know I've already read this story, but Yay!Harry heard her And when the hell did Lavender and Parvati become so nice to Hermione? They certainly don't seem to get along that well in the books. I like how you write them though. Nice is certainly better than bitchy! I had a slight laugh when Lavender said that it was none of her business what was going on between Hermione and Harry. She and Parvati are pretty much the gossip queens of Hogwarts. Oh well, great story, great writing!
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/12/07
Poor Hermione! Poor Harry! Poor Petra! Poor Orla! Everything's so sad. I love Petra's character and how strong she is even though she's the youngest. I also loved Neville's moment, towering over the younger students.Great job
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/12/07
Poor Hermione! Poor Harry! Poor Petra! Poor Orla! Everything's so sad. I love Petra's character and how strong she is even though she's the youngest. I also loved Neville's moment, towering over the younger students.Great job
 

BRD
Unsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 05/12/07
UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/12/07
Favorite line: "Better yet, Ron, I think that after Sprout’s class tomorrow, I’ll ask Hermione to join me for some sherry and giggles and maybe we’ll throw in a shag or two.” “You know, sarcasm doesn’t become you, Harry.”

I loved the Gryffindor Boys' advice session. Seamus' lines were the best, and Ron's irritation at Seamus was funny too.Great writing.
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/12/07
Slightly confused...I had forgotten the scene with Voldemort and Hermione's parents. Did he really kill them or is he keeping them alive for some reason? Why were they shackled instead of just killing them strait away? Obviously He wanted something from them. You did a great job with Hermione's grief. I thought the disbelief, and the way you withheld the contents of the letter until she was alone in the common room was great. I loved the moment at the end between Harry and Hermione as well.
 

SiriusTrouble
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/12/07
I'm reading this story again for the second time. I was so excited that you had updated that I wanted to read it all again even though you had posted a summery. I originally started reading it on MuggleNet and got hooked. I love the beginning where it goes back and forth between Harry's and Hermione's thoughts, you wrote that very well.I also loved Harry's anger and emotions about Sirius. I think you're a great writer, keep it up. I, unfortunately, am not a very good writer, and I haven't tried to post any stories as of yet. (It doesn't really help that I'm a terrible perfectionist) Please update again fast and frequently. I'm very excited to see where it goes.
 

logan
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 04/12/07
ooooh - you certainly do not disappoint! I really am looking forward to the next two chapters. How many more will there be? It seems things are coming to a head, so to speak....thanks for not giving up on it!
 

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