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TomsLuver69
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/12/04
oOOOOoHH!! update! but wait a second... didnt draco realize that ginny was crying right next to blaise?? but ya whatever.. UPDATE!
 

TomsLuver69
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
OMG! that bitch... oooh i should SMACK her. that is sick!! hope u update soon.. i wanna know what happens!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/12/04
WOW!!! This story is really awesome, very original and well-written. I felt for Ginny, but then again what gal wouldn't lol! I think this is such a great idea and that you should update! Are you planning on only three chapters or three different stories because it says in the summary thats it's 'part one of three' so i was wondering. Poor Draco. Oh I have read your other stories and just wanted to say kudos. Look foward to reading some more! xoxo.
 

luckyducky
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/12/04
WOW! Love the torture. Alwyas thought a story needed darkness to make it good. Great Chapter. Continue soon!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/04
dang...
thats so messed up
she dont even love him why she gotta do that to ginny?
 

Momentyne
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/04
*sobs* Poor Ginny and P-poor Draco, cruelness, Cho is a BITCH and a whore who I would like to step on in my new stilettos and twist and laugh mwahahahaha! Erm, okay it's a fab start though gruel-filled... Fab! Im so sick -_-
 

Adrial
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/04
yech...talk about some vivid details there. what a horrible way of torture...it made every part of me cringe, reading that. think about editing the grammar of the very first paragraph--it's a bit sloppy and could scare away readers who don't usually spend time reading if they aren't drawn in by the first paragraph or so. usually i'm one of those, but this time i kept reading. it really seems promising. i hope you update soon; this could be an interesting fic.

remember not to go too quickly though; the plot seems extremely complicated, especially with the "muggle-free" world mentioning and ginny's fake death.

anyways, i really look forward to the rest!

~Adrial
 

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