Nice start - Hopefully this will somehow tie into the Grinelwald canon or explain the time travel. I am look forward to the rest.

so beautiful

truly wonderful, i don't know what to say else but that i really really hope you're a fast updater.
and that you finish this story.

great idea. and perhaps later in this story you could raise the rating. heheheehe since they'll have to spend a lot of time together as man and wife.

anyhow great job

Okay, this is a pretty neat story! I usually don't read too many AU fics, generally don't care for them but I'm a sucker for WWII stuff and I couldn't resist giving your fic a look. I like what I've read so far. Definitely got my interest. Looking forward to some H/Hr action. Is Hermione a witch? Or will we find out later?
hammergal

I really like the beginning of this. I'm curious to see where you take it. Update soon!

This is really interesting. I get the feeling that Hermione isn't a witch, but I really hope she is. I don't really know what else to say.

That was interesting. An alternate universe fan fiction. I know that Hermione and Harry will somehow meet up, but how? How can Hermione possibly hope to find "The Wizard" when absolutely noone else can seem to catch him? This chapter is very short, but very intriging. I have hardly any idea what's going to happen next, but I'm very curious to find out.

Hey, interesting story.
Got a few questions, first is hermione a witch in this series??? and two are you basing this fic in a book or a movie??
I am a huge fan of world war II. And I always felt that JKR somehow based the Harry Potter books on it. So I would like to keep reading your work.

mhh cool story. the ww2 is one of my favorite hobbys (not as in killing people. i just find it very interesting and yes im german) and just like some1 before me said i love powerful harry fics will the rating rise? well...good job there. keep up the good work and update soon plz

I like it! A lot, as a matter of fact! I's very original, which means rare now a days. I adore the way you descreibed Harry, he's so sexy! Me just loces powerful!harry! Go you!

WOW! that was quick! updated on the same day! COOL! update soon pls! I LIKE THIS STORY!

Well, this is a lot like The Black Star, your other fic. But it's darker and far more interesting, if I may say so myself. You are a brilliant writer and I can't wait to read more from you.

Enjoy your writing.

Sauron of Mordor.

This is very very brilliant. All mysterious and dark, and waiting for an expert hand like yours to unfold all that is unknown. Brilliant work.
Can't wait to read more

Sauron of Mordor.

Great chapter! Better than the first - you are really warming up to this. Can't wait for more Wizard/Black Rose interaction!

There's lots of potential in a WWII setting for adventure and romance. And Hermione's not a witch, I gather? Hmmm...interesting. Do they call Harry the "Wizard" because he's elusive, or because of his magical abilities? Braddock doesn't seem too surprised at his vanishing act. Good going. Just wish the chapter was longer.

Interesting..i think its great, so hermione must not know harry and shes not a witch
Hermione not witch= bad, but ill have to live with it because this story is awesome it would be great if harry got hermione back to the officers in like 5 minutes