Thats cute! abit cheesy, but cute stories are always abot cheesy,so you did good!   |
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shadyBLUESigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/04
hey... 
this was realy sweet.....
i love the simplicity of it....
hehehe....
i thought Elizabeth's poem would be here...
Harry sort of quoted it...
ahehehe...
i like it....
very romantic.......
hehehe......
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Author Feedback: Thank you very much for your review! I'm so happy you liked it...
Sarah |
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MJLSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/04
693 words of pure fluff.  After the day I've had your story greatly helped lift my spirits. So thank you and well done. |
Author Feedback: You're very welcome...I've had a few people say that it lifted their spirits...maybe it's true?  haha...thanks for the review!
Sarah |
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Haha, aww this fic is just so incredibly CUTE. Makes me giggle and think of marshmellows and pillow fights. Pillow fights? Do I sense a plot bunny?
Hmm, anyway. Please try and get to Portraits sometime! I'm a very loyal reader (I know, THIS MISSAZNWONDER PERSON KEEPS COMMENTING!)and it's a very interesting story. Can't wait to hear more from you. |
Author Feedback: haha...marshmellows and pillow fights...love it...and I'm so excited that you're a loyal reader! it's like...my first one...i feel like crying some happy tears!!! and i'll update asap...i just have some medical problems...and i got let down really bad in the past two weeks so my life is off lately...but thanks so much for your review!
Sarah |
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That's sooo cute!! It's the perfect short story that makes you feel better when you're down!! Thanks! |
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Ah, very cute! I like it. Just how I imagine them in five years. You did an excellent job on the story. Great job!
Thanx, Shayna |
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HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
ahh, *dreamy sigh* I love your stories. This is just what I needed today. A little bit of cute fluff. thanks!! You did a great job as always. It was sweet. can't wait for your next story. |
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aaww! so so so so so so so so so sooooooooooooooo sweet! I loved it! Nice diolauge between them! Keep writting and updating at Portkey! Have a nice day! ~Kelsey~ |
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Fluffy and sweet! Just the way I like them! Put a bright spot on this seriously snowy morning! |
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willowUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
Very very sweet It made me smile  A little oneshot was exactly what I needed today |
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LilLambSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
very cute, sugary fic. i love how it's so easy for them to tell each other the reasons why they love each other |
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MelissaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
Such good fluff good for the begining of my no brai winter vacation great Job |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
That was very warm and sweet. I remember waking up with my late wife, and talking much the same. Brings a ear to my eyes. Alorkin |
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TalionUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
Very sweet and to the point. This just goes to show that a story doesn't need to be novel length to show the depth of these two's love. I really enjoyed it. |
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LuciferSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
Hard work~~ Really! You must be a very big fan, otherwise, how could you quote such a lot of paragraph in the stories! Though the story is short, it is densed with many memories... happy, sad, exciting, depressing... You have made a very good job~ Keep on! |
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