You know, I've read quite a few stories here on Portkey by now, and I've never yet given a review. I love your story. Nature tied to human emotions is one of my favorite concepts in literature, but it doesn't really turn up that often. I thank you for your superb rendition.

stormy!

What anamazing story! Just the right mix of story and plot

oh boy!
I love it, the way you write and the senario!

Interesting. Well written and easy to read, I wonder what Harry will find on his tour of the school. You have me hooked!

I liked that info on the organisms they sound so interesting. I don't really know how I feel about this story- mental intrigue to me is better that physical meetings. Ah well I love your writing style with the descriptions and what not regardless of what you are writing.

OMG - that story was so HOT! But it was also really well written. It was cohesive, descriptive and vivid. You really do know how to conjour a picture. I do have to agree with one of the other reviews though...your use of some of the more slang terms for body parts seemed a little out of place...having said that I'm not sure what else you could've called the Kitty that would've been any better, I guess it's tricky to get the right words in without sounding tacky or dramatic!

OMG I LOVED IT! It was amazing, the way you described everything.... the storm, the water, the sexual feelings and experiences. That was fucking awesome.
you have a TRUELY AMAZING gift for writing.

I love it
keep it up hun
-megz-

BRILLANT! *claps* Very well written! I love how Hermione seems to be an other wordly creature while covered in the silverly substance from the lake. The images that come to mind are beautiful. And the love scene is very romantic. Very well done.

As nice as that was, certain elements of sexually charged langauge (particularly word choice relating to certain body parts), seemed out of place among the beauty of the rest of the event.

Other than that, it was very nice written.

Wow... If the previous chapter was hot then this one was volcanic! LOL! What a great fic! And I liked the metaphor of them being the storm. Or perhaps you meant it literally, with their passion summoning forth the maelstrom. *shrug* Either way it's a brilliant and wonderful fic! Great job!

Wow... This is so...hot... I love i! lol! I'm sure I know what happens next. ^_^

Wow... I think there encounter is gonna be a hot one. ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next so off to the next chapter I go!

Wow... What an enticing scene Harry discovered... If that's Hermione I have a hard time seeing her swiming in the nude. And in the lake no less...

I love the way you write. It makes it really easy to picture the scenes in thie fic. Or at least those in this chapter. I can easily see Crookshanks sleeping like that. Though I'm sure the fact that my dog sleeps in a similar position helps. lol

Now where is Harry going and why do I get the feeling he'll run into Hermione?

This chapter was a great hook, I must say. You've piqued my curiosity and I must go on and see where this story heads....Great writting!