Hi bamaslamma29,
Great story, though I'm not sure what i liked more the actual story or your comments throughout
Now having read all 7 harry potter books i can now safely say I am now throughly disappointed in the direction JK Rowling has taken with her books. However after reading yours and other stories on the site I am now happy to announce that I have renewed vigour in the HP world.
Your story even though being completly different to the actual story not only adds and reinforces the main story, it almost confirms some of my beliefs. I want to thank you for the excellent storyline and keeping interesting well into the night.
Also are your going to post the final chapter for this story as mentioned in the authors notes and will there be a sequel to this?? I must admit it would be wonderful to see what your thoughts are on how everyone turns out and grows up...
Your Everfaithful Reader:
Andrew