I don't think Kingsley was that old, probably something around 40.
Also, I really don't think it fits that Tonks saw him as her father.
She has a decent relationship with her own father so there's really no sense in that particular line.

Richard marx.. Good choice.. The story is certainly interesting so far.. It's well written and the over all plot is interesting indeed.
I really hope it turns into a story where Voldemort tries to corrupt Harry slowly but surely from a sort of mentor role..
We'll see.

Another great one THanks a lot for the mention as well and keep up the good work

woo! I forgot about what happened in this story so I went back and re-read a few of the chapters. I guess now the real mystery is how much control Voldemort has over Harry, eh? *Awaits update*.

OH MY GOD.
i have spent a fair part of the last two days reading your story and i have loved it.
I love your plot and i am glad harry changed in a way.
you have written this story very well and i can not wait to read more.
i hope Harry is not completely under voldemorts control that would suck.
I especially liked the way you transformed harry and got into the death eaters side of him so well.
i liked the fact that McClaggen recognized that he was acting like Snape,
those minor details you have included have made your story a joy to read.
i hope you update soon

This one seems to be taking a little while, but it is very much worth the wait for it when it comes out. You are still doing a wonderful job in the writing of this fic.

The ending of this one was so sweet! I'm glad that they got out of there.

And I hope that Voldemort and his Death Eaters get what they truly deserve.....the no good bastards.

I've missed you! Update soon!

~Harmony_4ever88

Hey. Wow! That was brilliant! I've been waiting ages 4 an update and it was worth it. You've written this really well and the story hasn't lost it's edge. I hope you'll update it soon. Thank you 4 updating it. It really was a great read.

that was great ..please please update soon .. later for now

angel

Very well done. I can't wait to read more of this story. Hopefully you won't make us wait very long.

OMG!

You've won my heart with this masterpiece! Update soon because I wanna know EVERYTHING! This is gold.

~Harmony_4ever88

Hallelujah! You've returned! I've loved your story for a while, and I've been waiting for an update for just as long! And here it is! It was so unexpected! I'm so happy about it though! Please please PLEASE keep updating! I LOVE this story and I love to see its return even more! Bravo!

Great chapter. I loved the update and I can't wait to read the next one. Keep up the amazing writing

P.S. eeeeeeeeeee, I've read this story in 2 days but now I'm itching to know what happens! I can't wait to see how the rest of the battles turn out!

Great chapter. I loved the update and I can't wait to read the next one. Keep up the amazing writing

P.S. omg, I can't wait to read what happens next

Great chapter. I loved the update and I can't wait to read the next one. Keep up the amazing writing