eilenbebSigned | Chapter : 46 | Date : 08/10/09
very great story so far i just hope you plan on bringing a way to free Harry from this control that Voldemort has him under  and i dont know how you did it but i think this might be one of the best stories i have read that is angst and such and i like the slightly dark harry also that was an excellent twist to this story as well |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 46 | Date : 14/09/09
This has been a thoroughly enjoyable story, all the way from Chapter One. I'm sorry if you're discouraged from a lack of reviews, but the story is so well-paced, it's difficult to step back and take it all in. You're a wonderfully gifted writer, and I do hope you will continue this story to its proper resolution...it's too good to leave. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 09/08/09
good chapter as always i love u ur as always my favorite writer. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 09/08/09
i love ur stories. ur the best writer ive seen in a long time i love u keep writing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 20/07/09
It is always a treat to read someone\'s idea of how the Harry Potter series should have gone after The Order of the Phoenix. This is a wonderful story; the characters are acting exactly as they should be, and the plot and dialogue are very well-written.
For not being your first language, your English is very impressive. I\'m sure the details will fall into place. I know I would be completely lost in Norwegian!
My only comment is that the \"Mione\" nickname is rather cheesy. If I recall correctly, Harry never calls Hermione by that name in the books.
I think it is a fanfiction invention that should be done away with.
Otherwise, bravo so far! Have you considered becoming a serious writer? |
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I do hope they didn't kill Akin, why didn't Ron keep it away from them? Besides him being an idiot that is. |
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Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can. |
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jamesUnsigned | Chapter : 46 | Date : 04/07/09
i have read so many stories since this ,that i had forgoten . your detials of emotions and physical discription are quite vivid ,and leaving
just enough imagination is much epreciated .
i need {want}to go back and reread to refresh .
ty for not leaving us hanging,,we most know what
shall be . tc |
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Alright! Another update. Way to go. I hope we hear more from you soon. can't wait for the next chapter. |
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Your combonation of dark Harry and romance story-line is very well balanced. I know i`m kind`a late in revewing ths story, but I hope to read many more chapters. |
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dreamgodzUnsigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 27/04/09
brilliant series and well written although harry being a death eater was unexpected but great story |
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scyther85Signed | Chapter : 45 | Date : 31/03/09
great story, it's probably the most creative reason for harry following Voldemort that i've read, can't wait for more chapters. |
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scyther85Signed | Chapter : 45 | Date : 31/03/09
great story, it's probably the most creative reason for harry following Voldemort that i've read, can't wait for more chapters. |
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Enjoyed reading this and look forward to finding out what happens next. Nice job with brainwashing Harry with a potion...very creative. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 31/12/08
wow it was great
well i thought thet 6-th year would be something like this until JKR wrote it |
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