this story was very well thought out and written. you have the ability to convey your thoughts really well. i love how original it is. great job.

Keep up the great work... look forward to reading more...

As Always,
Muirnin

This is really sad! Keep up the great work and write more!

OMG - this is just too depressing. I can hardly breathe, I feel so badly for Hermione. The last paragraph - I can't read it without getting a panic attack. "her intolerable existence" I just can't stand it. Beautifully written but unbearably sad.

Stunning. Parts of this piece can only be described as pure poetry. You truly have a gift for making a character whose life is so miserable and painfull seem beautiful if only for her singular devotion. I am reminded of Hardy's Tess of the D'Urbervilles and her immortal love for Angel. Is this the end? Or will there be more? It would be interesting to see Harry's perspective if you chose to go that way. Either way, well done, truly!

That was so heartbreaking!!!!POOR Hermione! excellent writing though!!!! I wonder if Harry really never felt anything for her beyond friendship???? well, as he got married and has kids...he probably didn't...but the question is...WHERE is his wife? She's not with Harry and the kids, right?

What on earth possessed you to write that??
It was very good and heart breaking. I admire the plot and the style. I just can't help being a bit sad as I am a hard core H/Hr ship mate. Wonderful, and depressing.

Holy crap! That was very angsty or dramatic or whatever, good job. Anyway, brilliant work, poor Hermione and all that kind of stuff.

Well, that was...awful. Not the writing, but the outcome. This *not* how the story can end.

(grrr, this stupid thing cut off the rest of my review… good thing i remember it)
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OMG!! HOW, HOW, HOW(!?) have you just made me