Nice fic! I like the way harry is able to stand up and fight for her, and i also like that it was ron after all who brought them together. |
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You are awesome! All of your stuff is incredible...I can't wait to read more - you did an excellent job with this one...I love it. |
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AuliyaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/05
Really sweet little story, if a little melodramatic. I absolutely love the song that goes along with it, it's one of my favorites. The bittersweet tone suits the story perfectly. |
Author Feedback: damien is love. i listen to him almost every time i write.  him.
and glad you liked the story  |
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awwwwww. That's amazing, I love it! The symbolism of the rain is a nice touch too. |
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eedsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/03/05
sorry for the double post, but i just wanna say that i've just listened to the song!
and i have to say.. "wow!" because relating the song to your first descriptions about harry in this story possibly makes his depression doubled!
and now i feel like i want to cry for how great his confrontation with hermione has made a difference.
brilliant job little creek! this cheers darlin' is just amazing!
(and now i'm promoting to those who haven't listen to the song to DO SO!!!) |
Author Feedback: thanks
glad you liked it. and yes, the song makes all the difference, i listened to it over and over while i wrote this one! |
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eedsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/03/05
*giggle giggle*
i think this is a really good story!!
though it's a bit sad that you killed ron. (but of course, it made all the sense for harry's behaviour. that silly git!)
good job! |
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tonic2wSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/03/05
I enjoyed this piece of yours as much as all the others I have read. I liked how you were able to make it angsty and real at the same time.
The only question I had was whether she was actually seeing that guy or not. LOL!
Great work again.  |
Author Feedback: I couldn't decide which of your reviews to reply to, but this one had the question, so...
No, she wasn't seeing the guy, but I wanted it to seem like they were sort of headed in that direction. Flirting, I suppose.
I see you're reading Circle of Oblivion now. It's my only long one and sort of ambles at times, but I hope you like it as well.
Thanks for all of your lovely reviews. I really appreciate it so much.
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kof00Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/01/05
ohhhhh such a sweet story.. kind of fluff kind of drama!!!
you really have athing for the rain!!!
but it works... just like a classic movie scene. it plays out perfectly!!!!
more h/hr from you!!! you rock |
Author Feedback: have been checking my stories on a whim and saw you read several. thanks for reviewing and glad you enjoyed them  |
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I adore the ending, very sweet and fitting.
I have a fetch for rain fics, as well. |
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Great chapter. I really could feel the intensity and tension radiating off of both Harry and Hermione. Good work, and the rain setting was perfect! |
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I LOVE THIS SONG u did a great job showing the pain and passion of the song and the feelings between the two if u want to write another Damien Rice songfic give me a shout i'll love to help or even beta. GREAT JOB! |
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I love it. It's so honest, if that's the right word. They both hurt so much at the loss of Ron, but it leaves them with their feelings. Ron being gone delayed the natural course of things, but they're still happening. Finally, after four years, they've found each other and discovered that that's all they need. I'd like to hear the rest of the story, but in this particular fan fiction, this ending is just fine. |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/04
Great story! I really like how Hermione was so willing to forgive him and how Lavendar so easily accepted it when she discovered Hr was with H.
I also really, really like how Harry made the assumptions about Hr knowing how he felt and then she explains that she didn't what with the war raging on, etc... That is usually thought to be the other way around and you wrote that very well, very believably!
Very well done. |
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Ah. What a beautiful story. I loved every word of it. Very well written. The flashbacks were great, a nice way to learn more about the story without fully saying what we were learning. if that makes sense. Great! |
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Goody! That was really good! Excellently angsty! And the Damien Rice contribution too? I'm Irish so... yeah, that's a good choice! Well, Just wanted to say very well done! Cheers- IamHermione |
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