I really did loved the ending. It was excellent!!!!!!!!!! I loved it. You should write a story with harry and nermoine having their children and suddenly hermoine died but the she comes back to life because lily gave hermoine power and james gave Harry power.

Everything was, i mean, IS perfect. From the attitudes of the characters to the plot of the story. But there is a teenie, tiny fluke, the events were succeeding rapidly, as in fast. I think the readers will like it more if you slow down the events so that there is suspense! But other than that, Its PERFECT!!!

Ouch! Harry got kinda burned at the end of this chapter, now didn't he? Then again, that was a very Harry-ish thing for him to do. hehe Keep up the good work.

It was good and I definitly liked the part where Harry got up to sing to her.

This story is sooo good!! I love how you used the lyrics to "gifts and curses." I have never heard that song, but the words are great.... but almost as good as your story!! WRITE MORE QUICKLY!!

awww that story warmed my heart! i absolutely loved it! Hermione was so lucky to have a guy who had no problems expressing his feelings like that, and in front of the entire school, no less ! WOW! i wish more guys could be like him. Job well done! Please write more- i have to find out what happens next!!!

Okay fic this... however, I find it a bit wierd that they could expect their releationship to be secret when the whole school just heard Harry's song. Harry might be a bit dense but not Hermione!
-quizgirl

Cute story. Takes a lot of Gryffindor courage to do that (even if it doesn't seem like Harry to do it). Though the end seems a bit off to me. I mean, everyone knew he was singing to her and then they ran out of the Great Hall together, so I think it's a little late to just tell Ron about them. Hogwarts' secrets always seem to be known to everyone, but especially when it happens in front of everyone.
All in all, I enjoyed your story!

That was so COOL!!!!! That was a really pretty song too. Did you write it, or is it a real song? Sry if that doesn't make sense

That was a really cute fic! I loved the song from the time that I first heard it - you did an awesome job.

I totally loved it. Somebody used this song in their other story (I will rock you)but changed the words to 'Mione instead of Mary.

gifts and curses... great song, spidey-man 2 soundtrack. hope ur story is gonna be as good as the song it's named after

AHHH! That was really good. I loved it. I simply cannot wait to find out if she will wait for him. Hopefully so!