hagridSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/05
I got som'att to say ter ya...I can't believe you let him walk outta that door, she needs to tell him, he needs to hear it. Fear be damned, these two are Griffendors after all. |
Author Feedback: hagrid I agree with you! But our poor little Hermione, she was just too shell shocked, I think. But I'm sure he'll hear it eventually.
Thank you for lumbering by!
-Ahn Na |
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"Cho Chang…Ravenclaw indeed…more like a Beauxbatons reject…I MUST talk to the Sorting Hat about that one." Brilliant! Excellent. Fits with theories we all have about her strange behavior in the Book-That-Must-Not-Be-Named. |
Author Feedback: Hi Mooney!
Thank you for reading this little story...I've always liked it, because I got to play around a little more in Hermione's mind than usual. And it's a fun place to be! I'm really glad that you quoted that line...it was my favorite to write.
See you back at Here at the End (hopefully!)
-Ahn Na |
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This is so sweet and so heartbreaking. I really love it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you Phoenixtear!
I think I just replied to you over at "Here at the End". So, I'm glad that you decided to give this one a shot too! I always liked this little piece...although by and large people usually like "What it Costs to Save the World" best...I think maybe this was the most hurtful to me to write. Patient, noble, Hermione!
I appreciate the review,
Ahn Na Blue |
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dazzleboxUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/05
I love this story, I've read it several times and it always makes me cry. Well done.
One grammar comment: "I must be being very obvious in the way I favor him" 'be being' is a very awkward phrasing. 'I must be very obvious' works, or 'I must have been'.
I seem to have a real soft spot for these hidden moments and alternate points of view stories, and this one just seems especially nice. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much dazzlebox.
I appreciate you reading "Unrequited", I like it, just a sweet little snippet, and a bit of a challenge to write from Hermione's point of view.
Thank you for the grammar comment, I have no beta and just post things after one or two read throughs, so sometimes I miss some things.
Your compliments were very nice also.
-Ahn Na |
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aww, why are guys so damn thick? that was cute. hermione's patient, she'll wait and someday harry will realize. no offense, but i like What it Costs to Save the World better (did you ever realize the capitalation alternates every other word?). the hormones and the smut, that's really my cup of tea.
"I must have been broadcasting my silent thoughts through facial expressions. Not a smart habit." Lol, prolly not.
yeah, Drunken Honesty was my little, one-shot of smut; you weren't making a butt of yourself. dude, you should've left a review letting me know what you thought. sadly, i live for the reviews. and it's ridiculous that with nearly 4000 hits, i have only 11 reviews...sad actually. damn.
anyway, i like this ficlet. i like how you write in general. i'm glad my reviews amuse you; i try, really i do. great work, and yeah, keep it up. 
~Amanda |
Author Feedback: Hey Amanda,
Thanks for reading Unrequited, I know, quite different from WICTSTW, but I'm glad you thought it was okay.
Sorry for not leaving a review at Drunken Honesty! I am like the worst reviewer ever! When you post your next one I promise to leave a nice, well thought out something or other.
Although it probably won't be as fun as the reviews that you leave me.
-Ahn Na |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/05
This is a pretty nice one-shot!  Great Job with it! It just ended to early (i'm a big H/Hr fan ) ~Anu~ |
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Zapata666Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/05
This is a wonderful story, very well written. One of the things I like the most about it is that that you didn't over do it with the angst. Sure, its there and its great, but you break it up nicely with lighter moments in Hermione's internal monologue.
FANTASTIC WORK. |
Author Feedback: Thank you Zapata!
I'm glad I didn't go overboard with the violin-playing, opera-voice moaning tearjerker stuff. I was worried there. It's always an issue when writing sad things, you know, that they sound much sadder in your head and on the page only seem overblown.
So your review was very comforting. And flattering. Thanks again!
-Ahn Na |
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First off, extremely well written. I've always enjoyed stories from Hermione's point of view, mostly because I'm most like her in real life and I can appreciate all her emotions. And I could defintiely appreciate this story. Liking someone when they're one of your best friends? Been there. Sure, he wasn't trying to save the world, but my feelings weren't really reciprocated. So, yeah, I could definitely understand how she felt. And I absolutely LOVE angst, so this was a great read for me. Really nicely done. Made me smile at the bittersweet-ness, but at the same time I was feeling terrible for her. Bravo! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad I was able to get into her head. Sometimes it's difficult, since all we're given is Harry's mad brain!
Too bad about your friend...I hate that angsty stuff..I love that angsty stuff...
I'm glad it felt bittersweet to you. That's exactly what I was going for. And also, I'm getting sick of writing sad stories...I might have a happy ending one of these days, and I think it might be the sequel to this.
I appreciate the review,
-Ahn Na Blue |
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IcaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/04
Lovely job. I thought you captured Hermione's voice beautifully, and several parts were so heart-wrenching that I very nearly had tears in my eyes. Great work. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! It was rather difficult to pin down Hermione's voice when we're all so used to just Harry.
I appreciate your review, and am really quite gratified to have moved you.
Hope to see you at another fic.
-Ahn Na Blue |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/04
You did a wonderful job with this. I like it! I hope that at some point in the future you decide to do another chapter or an epilogue for it...it would be a beautiful thing for Harry to 'turn around and find the destiny that's really been waiting for him.'
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Author Feedback: Good to see you again.
I don't know what else to do with this one exactly, by way of a continuation...sometime it would be nice to do something like this from Harry's POV, maybe when he finally wakes up, but, I'm not sure.
Thanks for the praise.
-Ahn Na |
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KathSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/12/04
*tear* That was breathtaking. I can't even put into words ... beautiful. |
Author Feedback: Beautiful is a good word. One of my favorites, and I'm grateful to you for using it to describe the fic.
Thanks for reviewing. |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/04
Wonderfull  Perfect little story... I really hope you'll write more like this
Thanks for posting
 Lie |
Author Feedback: You're very welcome. Thank YOU for reading.
I hope to write more, my next one is a longer one...don't know when it'll go up...but perhaps I'll see you there. |
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that was such a brilliant short story. i really enjoyed from hermione's point of veiw, the way she sees everything in the world. really good
luv Alex
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Author Feedback: Alex!
Great to hear from you. I always enjoyed your reviews on the Perseus Castle. I'm glad Hermione's point of view worked out, it's my first deviation from the JKR style and it had me worried.
Thanks so much for reading and I hope to see you at the next one! |
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I miss soething, perhaps... the "I love U", or a tragical kiss! Yeah... perhaps I´m used to drama! |
Author Feedback:  Sorry! Drama is lovely, but I just had to keep Hermione's feelings internalized for this one. But there'll be plenty of hugging and sobbing in the next one, to be sure! |
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TelekSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/04
Hmm...perspective from hermione at the end of book 5... I hope in book 6 that they do end up together! Nice fic |
Author Feedback: I hope they get together in book six as well...but honestly I'm betting JKR will make us pine until book seven! She's a devious one!
Thanks for reading. |
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