mluiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/08
Good luck to Hermione! This is a very nice, albeit short, story. =) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/08
 This is so well written. It flows so well. I started CRYING...and I don't do that often!  |
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Okay, so this has been my fav. one-shot for quite some time (I even have it linked in my PK siggy so others can enjoy it). Anyhoo, it inspired me to make a vid:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kbPIJCKL4HY
I hope you\\\'ll check it out. Also, would you mind if I linked the story in the video description? That way, you could get some credit and people could read your story and see my inspiration 
- Malinda |
Author Feedback: Wow Malinda. Great video. And I love that song. Thanks for reminding me to get it on my iPod.
It's been a long time since I've been lured back here to reply to any reviews, but of course I had to tell you how much I enjoyed the vid. I haven't seen the order of the phoenix movie yet ( and truthfully I wasn't keen to) but those clips of yours almost make me change my mind. And I suppose I should...I do own the DVD, after all.
Awesome. And link my story whereever you want. I'm so flattered that you liked it.
Thanks for reading!
Ahn Na |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/03/08
SO SAD. Seriously, this is really sad. But very pwerful. Maybe one dya you'll continue it? |
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Hey Harry?
Even with those glasses... You are still completely blind!!!
Sorry, just wanted to add that.  |
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Oh god how I wish that had happened... 
Instead we got the crapilogue...
I loved this story.
Very well done |
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brittiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
you are a great writer.i really enjoyed this story & i look forward to reading your other stories |
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brittiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
you are a great writer.i really enjoyed this story & i look forward to reading your other stories |
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I just had to say that this is one of the best short's I have read, this is the way I would see it beginning for H/Hr and then grow from there. I love the style and your skill with the wording, it is almost poetic in it's own way. please keep up the good work I can't wait to read HP and the Perseus castle but want to wait till you have a few more chapter's. |
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Oh! That was so cute! I like that managed to get into Hermione's head without making sound out of character, even considering that I'm reading this post-HBP. Very nice.
Smooth writing style. Not too overly dramatic (Hermione's inner monologue, that is) but enough details to give depth to the story. Good job. |
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A simple poigant moment that you've crafted very well indeed. In fact you've probably inspired a few HP FF wannabes into playing with some "what if" and "if only" moments.
Excellent work. |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/05
AHHHHH! So touching!  Poor Hermione  I hope that day comes soon - esp. if it's not meant to last |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/09/05
Lovely sweet and lovely. I'm one of those who believe that her injuries at the DoM, plus finding out about the prophecy, made Hermione pull away from Harry and toward Ron in HBP. Ron is safer than Harry; she already knows (or believes) that he fancies her, and he doesn't have a price on his head *sigh* Fortunately Hermione came to her senses, at least partially, at the end of HBP. I hope that we see more of THIS Hermione in Book 7. |
Author Feedback: Well hello Anne!
Thank you for reading and reviewing Unrequited. And I agree with you. JKR said it herself, Harry is a scary boyfriend to have. In my opinion, she was totally pulling a rope a dope with this Ginny business, and in the whole interview, when she's talking about Ginny, she mostly sounds like she's talking about Hermione. She made it very obvious that Hermione is changed and timid in this book...the old Hermione would have really delved into any weird happenings with Malfoy, and would have taken action against that Half-Blood Prince Potions book...remember the Firebolt? And she wouldn't have been so afraid of Buckbeak. Come on.
Anyway, I hope we see our old Hermione back in book 7 as well. She rocks.
-Ahn Na |
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islanzadiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/09/05
I've been reading your latest fic and thought you were such a good writer that I would read some of your other stories. WICTSTW was a really good one, I loved the ending even though it was so sad I loved the creativity. Even though this is just a little one, it's great too. You just keep on surprising me 
So, onto the only story of yours I haven't read yet. Something about a castle?? Looking forward to it, and for the rest to come
Islanzadi  |
Author Feedback: Islanzadi-
I'm really so flattered that you're bothering to read my stories. Thank you! Terribly glad that you enjoyed WICTSTW, even though it was tragic. That bugged a few people...but...that's the way it goes.
This little snippet was just aching to be written, I wanted to attack Hermione's point of view, she had to be so frustrated with him, and we just don't get to hear enough from her, (especially in HBP).
I hope that you like The Perseus Castle, because it was the very first HP fic I wrote. And you might noticed that I nicked the "flammarion serum" from it to use in Here at the End.
Thanks again, I really appreciate it!
-Ahn Na |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/05
Ok like i said i dont usually review but your my favorite author. I loved this one too it was a awesome break from series reads. This story touched on emotions and thoughts that (i believe) occur in the HP books and like one day it will all be over and maybe he will see her. Sigh... I guess we can only hope, one day. |
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