AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/11/08
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i think...that this was one of the most passionate scene in ANY story that i have ever read. the posession harry had over hermione was so overpowering. i couldnt help but feel shocks and waves of static going through my whole body as i read it. Your way of describing this scene was so magical. Very very beautifully written.
Wonderful job on this. |
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A drunk party, eh? Just like boys, always think they can drown out their problems when it comes to girls. Well, I expected better from those two, tsk, tsk. Ah well, the Harry and Hermione dialogue are wonderful here, you know?
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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Very interesting, I did like this chapter a lot. I liked that you made Harry's talks with himself short, sweet and to the point instead of dragging it on like he was mentally insane. It's a shame about Ron though, not that I like im or anything, but he did realize that he liked Hermione first.
I guess that's how it goes, hunh? Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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I'm not sure how many times I've read this story, and I've probably reviewed it a few times too, but I always feel compelled to leave a note to explain how much I love this story.
Several scenes in this fic basically defined Harry and Hermione's relationship, for me at least. The second scene on the roof is what does it for me though-- the whole concept of them claiming each other... I just love it; it makes me shiver, I swear. And then the emphasis of this point in the scene after Dumbledore the Downer comes in... Placing each other above everyone else in such a way... Ah, the Harry Potter series could have been so much more with scenes so full of raw emotion like yours are.
Anyways, just letting you know that I basically worship you for writing this fic.
That is all. Heh. |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/08/07
It's good, and i'm scared of this kind of plot as this is one of the (very few) possible reason for him to take the wrong road.
Well done, ciao! |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/08/07
This is an AMAZING story! It's absolutely incredible! so emotional, so intense... i honestly had a hard time breathing through it.. the intense emotional power of it, it had my stomach clenched and my heart racing...
a truly INCREDIBLE piece of writing... i hope you are very proud because you deserve all the praise in the world.. this story was truly moving, one of the best ones i have ever read.
thank you so much for this amazing piece of writing... if only you had written harry potter, rather than JK.. lol
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/08/07
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Goshhhhhhhhhhhh... what the hell happened here? Wellll... I think... they look much more older in these situation then theyre already...
dont know... |
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Ouch... where did that come from?????? It was like a punnchhhhhh... really hurts! Incredible... when some would think of resolving their problems, it only getssss worse! |
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ok... THAT was pretty strong!!! really, veryyyyy demanding hun? And, matter of a fact, they are betraying ron... |
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OWWWWWWWWWW... groosssssss he was smellinnngggg vomit AND achool!!!! How... ewwwwww... i wouldnt kis him, not even if someone paid me! |
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I liked it veryyyy much, their talk was very good!! AND... angstly... but cool! |
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Honestly, this is my absolute favorite Harry/Hermione story to date. And that's saying something given the vast number of fanfics I've read. I think this was my fourth or fifth time reading this story. It's really magnificent. If HBP hadn't chosen that, for lack of a better word, horrid route, I definitely could've seen this as a potential beginning or storyline. All of the characters were themselves, no one was OOC. Very well done indeed! |
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