Wonderful story, I laughed my ass off..
A parody on the books would be most welcome.

Good luck and thank you.

LMAO!

I love it!

Poor Peter. That's so true. It's like he doesn't even exist in all of those fics.

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~ Peter pauses, overwhelmed by the offer as he tears up and tries to think of the appropriate thing to say to express his gratitude.

PETER: Hey guys, what’s up?


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hahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahhaha this was stupendously terrific!! i loved it sooooooo much!! sooooo funn!! besides peter ALWAYS walking up and saying, Hey guys, what's up? (which was HILARIOUS), this was my other fav part:
LILY (Screaming): Who’s the boss?


ARABELLA: Tony Danza!

hahahahahahhahahahahahahha!! loved it!

loved it. loved it. have fun being 21 and dying miserably.

you have to keep writing this. i almost bust a gut trying not to laugh out loud, because the rest of the house is asleep. i've not enjoyed a fanfic this much in a long time. GO THE NEEDLESS SWEARING. And I love the ... Peter walks up, "Hey guys, whats up?" You are brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

Hi, just wanted to tell you, this is an awesome fic...I absolutely love parodies and this one is well-written(as a parody of course...)
PLEASE add more chapters, it would be really nice to not have the USUAL love/hate, lily/james stuff but a funny parody instead
Charlotte

lmao i adored it! and you know you're right. there's a bunch of 13 yr old girls who read this. and it's creepy, really. why are they reading ff?

see, it's better to be fifteen and pathetic that way.

roflmao. i loved this!!!!
-nati k a

lmao omg it was so freaking hilarious! i especially liked:JAMES: Are you sure you’re not just playing hard to get?



LILY: Of course I am! It wouldn’t be a Love/Hate plot if I didn’t pretend I didn’t want to ride you like the wild stag you are!

just too funny!!!

-nati k a

lol i loved this im fav part is when peter comes n says hey guys what's up lol

Am i making you feel special by reviewing? Good, and for your information i am 14 and only enjoy the occasional mascara swipe.

here's to idiets who review,xoxoxoxo
annie

Son enough you will begin working for Saterday Night Live, your story was obvious in a genius sort of way. When I started reading your story i was like wow, then i went to holy shit and by the end i was at the point of an undying chuckle. You seem like an incredible writer if not a little bit of a spaz, just kidding. I really like your story and i think a spoof love scene may be in order, maybe lily has her period, james cant perform or maybe one could get really fat and see what happens. Pimples could come up, one could have a disfigiration, be awful in bed or bite a little too hard on his cock, resulting in sterilization (good bye harry) and an embarresing trip to St Mundungos or whatever it's called. KEEP WRITING, YOU FRIKIN WEIRDO

Love, hugs, and awkward kisses,
Annie

yup, i saw strongbad's teen girl squad in there. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...this is hilarious, not least because i read way too much of this LJ plot bunny crap anyway. good job, can't wait to see the rest.

Hehe Very Funny... Nice job! You've covered all the clichés well.