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The Elvin Bride

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 26/10/08
Mmmm... yummy. So good! That was fantastic. Write again soon please!
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 10/10/08
ohh comoe one these fic could be sexier or hotter damm i wish i could go with my own draco to these freaking forest !!!!!!!
please do update soon ding to know more and so want to read cela's comments on rons abilitys lol
 

ninjamonkey
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 10/05/08
This story is that deal, i gotta have more or i'll lose it!!!
 

Sailor Universe
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 03/03/08
wow, draco had mentioned something I hadn't even thought about. i mean, with people not leaving the forest and all that... but according to your chapter spoiler they will be leaving the forest, so i guess i shouldn't be too worried about that.
i guess the only concern would be who's bruised by the whole trip, eh? lol...
for some reason i'm getting the impression that there's a faster way getting TO hogwarts than getting FROM hogwarts, and not just because the elves are, well, *elves* either. but maybe that's just me...
anyway! this next chapter definitely seems like it will be interesting... but i'm kinda feeling like cela is about to screw ron over (and not just literally like they have been, either)
 

Carna
Unsigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 20/02/08
OOOOOO Update please. This is a really great story and i hope that you update very soon.
 

HP_Lover_01
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 14/01/08
daaamn, that was a lot of sex. this chapter did not seem to flow as much as your writing usually does but other than that all it was really good and update soon please!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 23/11/07
ok so your jsut going to completely ignore the fact that you haven't updated in 3 YEARS!!!! maybe you should address that before you get any feedback, you don't deserve feedback, but i'll give it to you, this is a great story and you not updating in 3 years kinds of ruines it, so heres a tip! explain to the readers in an authors note why you havent updated in so long and apologize and then you can start getting just reviews instead of complaints cause that is just
R-E-D-I-C-U-L-O-U-S!!
 

moogle
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 22/11/07
Sex scenes aren't a favourite of mine I will admit it, but I am still wanting to read the story, so I'll handle it ^_~
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/11/07
i found a slight problem with your story, and i'm so thankful you've FINALLY UPDATED! but ya if ginny acquires all this stuff that elves have shouldnt she also acquire the ability to speak there language, so there really isn't a reason for hermione to go on the trip! hahaha i'm evil!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 19/11/07
I would actually like something to happen between Cela and Ginny.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 31/08/07
oh. my. god.

This chapter was posted on: 09/11/05

?!? DO YOU EVER UPDATE?! ITS BEEN NEARLY TWO YEARS!!! ?!?

at least tell me if theres another website with this story on.
 

sirius'sgirlsparrow'sswann
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 08/07/07
hey, really like it... you are one of the few people i know that can do smut well...
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 30/06/07
I know you haven't updated this story in a while, so wanted to review and encourage you to do so, I loved this story!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 13/02/07
you have great story ideas..i wish you would update sooner..please please please..update sooner...thanks..
 

MARK'S BABY
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 31/01/07
WELL I THINK THAT I HAD AN EXPERIENCE LIKE THAT WITH MY BOYFRIEND AND I DIDN'T LIKE IT IT REALLY DOES HURT AND I THOUGHT THAT BECAUSE WE ARE ENGAGGED THAT WE COULD TRY ANYTHING BUT THAT'S NOT THE CASE
 

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