AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
That was absolutly brilliant!!!!
Awesome!!!
Perfection!
Keep it up!
Big props for The Dark Sorceror!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
In the very first paragraph, you wrote ever instead of every....... "Ever so slowly they were breaking him, shattering EVER part of him.... etc etc etc.
Just thought i would let you know!
Now i must get back to reading your story! (after i saw that i jumped down to the bottom cuz i thought i might forget and not tell you!) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/01/06
Hurry up! iam desprate to find out what hppans to harry! |
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HeidiHoSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 10/09/05
Very exciting chapter!! I do hope Harry gets his arm back, though - I like my Harry whole, at least physically.  Very interesting story - I can't wait to read more of it, so keep writing. |
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Masboy11Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/09/05
So far, I see no difference in Hermione's and Harry's character at all. They are very much like the cannon characters, especially Hermione with her sweet, innocent worrying.
I can only imagine that "The Dark" is what I would consider a Dark Harry, which is Harry fueled by his negative emotions. Although I can't put my finger on it, I think there is something more to it, and I also imagine that there is an anti-thesis to The Dark through what I would consider The-Power-He-Knows-Not: Love.
At least, that's what I'm hoping. You're a very good writer, and I find Harry very unpredictable. I can only imagine what he will do next. |
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Masboy11Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/05
I can already tell this is gonna be one heck of a strong dark story. I can imagine Hermione lessening the amount of anger and guilt Harry is going through, but will it be enough, is what I'm asking.
I like what I see so far. |
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Keep it coming- this just keeps getting more and more gripping with every chapter. Keep up the great work.
L.B
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goofballSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 06/09/05
YAY!!! i may admit that im replyin to the story again but...i gotta say YAY harry going to hermiones woot!! i like her parents..some people just make em soo funny...cant wait to see what you do with em |
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goofballSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
CRAP CRAP CRAP!!!! oh wait no this is actually pretty good.  anyway keep it up |
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hpgirl476Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 06/09/05
Yea!! you are posting again!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Harry!! I hope they find him soon!! I hope you post more soon!! |
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hpgirl476Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 20/07/05
You haven't posted in a really long time and I really like this story so I am hoping you will continue this wonderful story!! I can't wait until the next post. Hopefully that will be soon. Please Post More!!! |
Author Feedback: I won't be updating this story anymore, but my new story-Dark Rage: The Manipulator- pretty much follows all the ideas and stuff that happens in this story. If you like this one, you'll like the new one.
Really sorry about not updating :/
New Note! I have decided to continue writing this story! Yay! |
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SarahUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 15/05/05
Wow this is an so dark chapter hope it turns out fine for harry in the end and have his normal powers just again! |
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DannyUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 14/05/05
Well this is confusing lets read the next but its still quit alright don`t worry about that! |
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Wow.  This was a really really great chapter- gripping actually with the fight... wow.
Looking forward to your next update.
L.B |
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DaveUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/05/05
This chapter is so dark, how did you wrote it so dark! |
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