stnssydnySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/08
i liked the start of this story and it seems to be really interesting to read and I can't wait to see what happens. |
Author Feedback: Welcome new reader! 
I still like the start of this story too! 
Hope you continue to like it after you see what happens. I'd love to hear from you in the form of reviews as you read through it if you have a moment now and then. At the very least you'll get more Portkey Points if you review. 
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 51 | Date : 11/09/08
Nice story i enjoyed it greatly. I wish you have something for me to read. |
Author Feedback: Well, after you read my daughter's story that I recommended, you could always start on Their Way, which I am being a beta on. (And yes, IronChefOR does plan on finishing it someday - he's just been very busy at work.)
Also you can look at a few of my recommended fics under my author's name. Anything by Romulus Lupin is good, and I love Finding a Muse - but that's because I have a background in music.
Good luck in your quest for good stuff to read! It's been a pleasure to read your reviews.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 48 | Date : 11/09/08
nice fight sequence and its a shame that sirius still died. I caught the reference from i think it is called 'Airplane' never seen it myself, fromt he 80's |
Author Feedback: If you ever get a chance to see it on DVD, I highly recommend it. Usually when it's on TV they cut a few scenes so it's best to see the full version.
Glad you liked the fight sequence. As to Sirius, well, I think he explained his reasoning. And dying in defense of a friend is not a bad way to go.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 46 | Date : 10/09/08
I like the story so far and will chack out at least one of your daughters stories. |
Author Feedback: I'd recommend The Wish List if you are going to pick just one... 
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 43 | Date : 10/09/08
nice, defanging of umbridge. I like Sirius as DADA professor. looking forward to reading the rest. |
Author Feedback: Yep, Sirius would be a great DADA professor - even more fun than Lupin, I'd think - he'd be more willing to follow the Moody methodology and tell the students the unvarnished truth about the dark arts based on his experience with them.
As to Umbridge...  Hey, anything I can do to cause her "humiliations galore"  is worth it.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 38 | Date : 10/09/08
nice i like the changes to the canon of the third task. will read more soon. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for that - I'm enjoying reading your reviews.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 37 | Date : 10/09/08
It is interesting that Harmony is redoing her role as the victim of skeeter and Krum's date and 2nd task person. |
Author Feedback: Well, since she's already been through it once, it was only logical that she'd be the best person to do it the second time around.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 31 | Date : 08/09/08
A interesting twist i had not seen, but after Albus pointed out that Harmony meddled in the H/Hr relationship it would be a definite divergence of the timeline. |
Author Feedback: Didn't I say there would be more twists?
Yep...definite divergence.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 28 | Date : 07/09/08
Interesting twist. I like Harry moving out of Slytherin and into Gryffindor. Voldemort knowing about the other plan makes for a very interesting twist. |
Author Feedback: I seriously considered moving him out earlier, but I thought it would work out better for the story to keep him there until it was no longer possible for him to stay...I think that worked out best.
More twists to come... 
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 05/09/08
i am enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing how the timelines merge. My thinking will be a lot of people will suddenly have two sets of memories and i am also guessing that it will be linked with returning to 'uptime' or Harry breaking through the memory charm. |
Author Feedback: Well, you'll just have to keep reading to see which one of your guesses is or is not correct, I guess.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 05/09/08
I am afraid i missed the princess bride reference and had to look it up on imdb.com, an to my shame i love that movie and catch it whenever i can on the tube. |
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 04/09/08
Great story so far. Looking forward to reading the rest you have posted and adding review points in the process. Love the Bueller joke. I did get it before the A/N. |
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/09/08
An interesting turn of events. It will be interesting to see how you merge the two timelines near the end, cause I doubt it will be as smooth as Harmony and Albus expect. |
Author Feedback: Welcome new reader!
I'm glad you are liking the story so far enough to review. Yes, interesting is a wonderfully descriptive word, isn't it?
Let's just say that I think your doubts are reasonable...
Hope to hear from you as you continue to read the rest of the story.
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/09/08
Very good set of chapters. I like the story and the premise behind it. Looking forward to reading more of the story and finishing it. |
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smhalcyonSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/08
Very interesting story so far. I can't wait to see where the story goes. I hope you keep up the good work. |
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