I'm sooo sad for Lily. and worried. I think you portray the feeling of losing someone you love very much very well. I think it is refreshing. Excellent work.

ok so it wasnt james? or it was but he was possesed? im soo confussed so he cheated on her? but then they mentioned Voldermort.

oh and sirius is so funny

so the necklace has something to do with Voldermort wanting it and he broke up with lily because she has it? why didnt he just tell her?

ooooh James is worried about her getting cold bless... oh and sirius HAPPENED to find it? i doubt that very much some how

ooooh James is worried about her getting cold bless... oh and sirius HAPPENED to find it? i doubt that very much some how

he he so Sirius and Rachel and Grace and Lupin, i guess old loves die hard lol

Is this still in Hogwarts? or have they left already? you havent really said

oooh what are they skipping and where are they skipping too? i cant wait to read more

lol i cant wait to read more, i am not on PK as an author yet, i am just reading i plan on writting a lily and james fic soon and im just reading as many as i can to make sure that no one else has written what i have planned

oooh i really liked this

Natali have you got another fic going that i have read? i recognise your name

i totally love it xcept one thing. u seem 2 like having james nd lily breaking up nd them bothe being depressed b/c of it, and it always has to do with voldemort nd james, ah well c'est la vie!

very cute girlie! I liek it a whole tons! please please please update soon!

Awsome story, love the plot. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

HI natali! i read and yeah, now i'm reviewing. i miss you! you're at your grandparents right now if you don't remember.

twenty twenty twenty four hours ago, i wanna be sedated, nothing to do, nowhere to go, i wanna be sedated, just put in a wheelchair, get me to the shore, hurry hurry hurry, before i go loco, i can't control my fingers, i can't control my toes, oh no-o-o-o oh

lol, sorry, that song's on. good song. ok, yeah, i think i'm almost done with my TUB chap (about time, eh)

coming outta my cage and i've been doing just fine, gotta gotta be down because i want it all, it started out with a kiss, how did it end up like this, it was only a kiss, it was only a kiss, now i'm falling asleep, and she's a cab, while he's having a smoke, and she's taking a drag, now they're going to bed, and my stomach is sick, and it's all in my head, but she's touching his chest now, he takes off her dress now, let me go, i just can't look, it's killing me, taking control

sorry, that song's on now. another good song. yeah. ok, i love you, bye

i love this story! so much update soon! and update your other stories too please!

Well, great story no? As always a soft spot for the James and Lily fics, especially interesting, slightly different and immensely well written ones. That and its not sugar coated, its hormonial, realisitic... and contains many many references to the important things in life!

A excellent read, do update some time sooen, eh?
=o) Jo!