Ahh... that was so sweet! Generally I only read stories with lots of romance since fanfic authors tend to be fairly good at writing that but yours are amazing even without the incredibly obvious romance. You have a more subtle way of writing it in. Your imagery was awesome~overall you may be my new favorite author. Keep Writing!

Wow. Very nice story. Completely full of emotion, and wonderful imagery. Loved it. Great job!

~Cat

Bittersweet and Beautifully written. It left me with a longing sadness.

I loved your story. Very touching. Keep up the good work!

WOW! that was amazing. You know when you see or hear your read something that touches you that you get many shivers down ur spine...I got those the whole time! great work

Oww, that was extremelyt wonderful and moving. I'm sad that Harry died, but you wrote it well. I also liked your take on the prophecy "They said one would die and the other would live, but they never said how long..." That was brilliant and very true!
The prophecy isn't a definate happy end maker if Harry kills Voldie. Great thoughts.
Keep up the good work

Your story is almost like a poem. And I liked it when the snow fell during every significant event.

Silence.



*clears throat* Oh my gosh, beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I almost stopped reading because it was getting too sad for me. The part with the snow is so clever and I love how you make the falling of snow so important. I really enjoyed this story and I think I might go and read some more of what you've written...

it was hard not to cry. it was very very sweet though. i loved it. wow. very nicly written, i loved it! Keep writting and updating at Portkey! ~Kelsey~

woww - this is deeep and it even brought some tears to my eyes. amazingg.

that was beautiful but oh so sad Wonderful writing job.

not to bad i only wish that there was just one more chap

that was really sad, it was written so well. good job.

That was beautiful. Devastatingly sad, but beautiful. I loved everything. Excellent writing.

That was so sad. It brought tears to my eyes. But it was really well written....really. Great job...tears and all!