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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 04/09/08
confusing and stupid, i thought this was a complete waste of time when i finally finished reading it. well done on a superb master piece of complete bullshit.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 01/10/07
.... What? -scratches head- The story was really good until you got to the ending. I'll be honest, you're an AMAZING writer, but a horrid storyteller. The ending leaves you absolutely thrown off course, and feeling irritated and upset. It's not a good story unless you actually have a place you can stop and things make sense. I was so lost at the end. All Hermione did was hurt him, over and over again, where's the love in that? -shrugs- It was really good, but the ending should have been not so...as you say inconclusive. As a writer I know that a good story never really ends, but you can't have such a blase stopping point either. Were you trying to leave us at a point we could continue the story ourselves or something? I'm so confused, so can you please leave me a review response through my email? Until I understand what you were trying to depict in your story, I don't think I'll be reading any of your fics. I hate feeling as though it ended with a cliffhanger. Please give me some insight on this.
 

dragoncore
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 05/09/07
WOW, this was really good. When Ron and Janus died man that was sad but I still enjoyed the story,good work
 

RiXX
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 09/11/06
A truly inspiring story. You write with an ease that is rare to come across, and an eloquence that I find both refreshing and interesting.

I don't think I've read an AU story that I've enjoyed quite as much as this one. The visceral romance, the heart-wrenching emotion, the motifs and plot devices were all superb, as were the characterisations. A truly phenomenal story that I'll be recommending to anyone who'll listen. Excellent work!
 

Xaviel
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 15/07/06
Very wonderfully done crossover. You portray most of the characters true to their counterparts and the new ones fit right in. Like the original, I thought the ending was a bit vague, maybe more talking, maybe more action, anything to close all the plots off at least to the point where you can see why everybody did what they did. (In the sense that Kenshin killed the girl at the end much in the same manner that he -didn't- kill her in this one. Now whats wrong with that sentence?)
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 07/06/06
absolutely great. does this story have a sequel of sorts? anyway, kudos to whoever the talented writer is.
 

alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 22/12/05
Is tarted reading this story at Fanfiction.net and came here to finish it off. I love Samarui X. I think you did a great job with Sirius. He is exactly like Kenshin's master. I liked you changed the ending. You could to a sequel. You know like the sequel to Rouroni Kenshin where Kenshin has a son. YOu could do something like that for this story. Harry and Hermione have a son in the village but the death eaters come for them or something like that. YOu know voldemort and Draco are still out there. There little peace won't last! Oh i read the first chapter of VII. I like it. HOpe you update that soon.
 

Moo-chan
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 22/10/05
Yowza, this RuroKen and Harry Potter crossover was beautifully done! Although I admit that throughout the entire story, I thought that Hermione's fate would be the same as Tomoe's. Guess not.

And I do believe that it was Shishio who played the part of executioner with Peter. Yay for references!

So overall, considering my high expectations of crossovers and the usage of Rurouni Kenshin, this story was absolutely fantastic! Although I do wish their was some sort of closure on Draco and Voldemort. Oh well...

Moo-chan
 

Darkassasinsaint
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 02/07/05
I'm angry at this wonderful story coming to a conclusion and ending, not at you.
 

Darkassasinsaint
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 02/07/05
So it comes to a conclusion, what I don't understand is I thought, Harry chose the path to darkness and vengence, not living a life with Hermione. Could you explain that? I hope you write another story or perhaps an addition, this was incredibly good. In my personal preference, the best of your work that I've read. I hope you continue to write. It's been fun reviewing every now and then.
~Darkassasinsaint
 

muup
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 27/06/05
wow... I never read anything like that... that was a really dark and cruel story... but nevertheless it fascinated me and I couldn't stop reading it. I didn't know "Samurai X" and normally such "bloody" things aren't the stuff I read but this one was so different. I still don't like the whole blood and murder stuff, but as I said it kind of fascinated me. *g* The story was very well written. I think you have a lot of talent.
 

Minoritysupahero
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/06/05
The story seems interesting so far but just to wanr you there is already a story based on this same kind of idea of a cross over of Kenshin and Harry Potter. I forget the authors name but the story is even Here on portkey. So far you stories seems uniqur but becareful of become to similar to the other auther. Well just keep turing them out
Author Feedback: Hm...I can't seem to find the fic on Portkey. Do you by chance have the URL? I would enjoy the chance to read it.
 

kira
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 22/06/05
So Harry chose to be just Harry instead of Slayer? This Epilogue confused me but I still enjoyed the story.
Author Feedback: Yup. I was originally planning on leaving the decision open ended, but I decided against it at the end. I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story!
 

atlantis-rob
Signed | Chapter : 27 | Date : 21/06/05
Awesome finish Japster! Great job with the death of the damn rat and how he ran at the end. What a looser. And excellent job on how harry and hermione return to the fishing village to live and escape the old life! Kudos and such! Hoope to see more from you in the near future!
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
 

kira
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/05
I really loved it. It was brilliant to say the least.
 

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